一步一步搞定雅思寫作（83）之針對兒童的廣告
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20180811
Nowadays, there is a growing amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think this has negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
這個題目能想的觀點很多，同意應該禁：
- 看廣告，被誘惑，買一堆不用的東西，消費習慣不好
不需要禁：
- 一些廣告還是能介紹一些好產品的
- 兒童廣告也是廣告業的重要分支之一啊，取消的話損失太大
正文部分：
Some people argue that adverts targeting children have negative effects on children and should be prohibited, but I cannot agree with this opinion.
Admittedly, children may be attracted by advertisements and purchase too many items. It is acknowledged that adverts will use vivid pictures to advertise their products and children may not resist such temptation easily. Then, they will ask parents to buy a variety of goods, such as toys and snacks, and it is difficult for them to develop better consumption habits if parents meet all their requests. Nevertheless, admitting the drawback of such adverts is not assuming that they should be banned totally.
To begin with, adverts can provide children with some useful information. Not all products promoted on television are harmful for children. For example, Lego products are beneficial for children because children can exercise their practical skills and improve their creativity by connecting Lego pieces of different types, colors and sizes to create what they want. Advertisements allow children, as well as their parents, to realize the benefits of Lego products and other toys, and without relevant adverts, children may not know such toys.
In addition, completely banning adverts aimed at children will affect the economic development. As is known, advertising industry is a huge industry and there are numerous companies that make profits by creating adverts targeting children. If such adverts are prohibited, it means thousands of employees will become unemployed, and the amount of tax from advertising industry will also decrease dramatically. Then, the local economy may be developed much more slowly.
To sum up, there is no need to prohibit advertisements aimed at children, considering that some adverts introduce some good products to children, and cancelling these adverts will affect the economy significantly.
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