雅思寫作筆記——（三）solution題型 例2-1

來自專欄雅思寫作記錄-w-

原本今天應該更influence題型的，但是剛剛看到一篇老師推薦的範文（劍橋8 test3）剛好和前幾天更新的prediction題型教育類有切合點，所以先碼solution題型好了。（是的就是這麼隨性...）

Ps：這篇文章是雅思考官給出的9分作文，具有非常高的參考價值。有價值體現在以下幾點：

1. 沒有用任何的超過高中的辭彙，語法，但是思路嚴謹。
2. 現在教育類話題依然是熱點。
3. 高質量的簡單句很多。
4. 中立結構。

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

題型判斷：solution題型（一些人認為父母應該教育孩子如何成為社會中的一員，而有些人認為孩子們應該在學校學習這些，給出你的觀點。明確，教育的對象：孩子；教育的目的：to be a good members of society;教育的方式：parents vs school）

中心思想:解決，how to be a good members of society.

拓展解讀：

什麼是社會優秀的一員？——遵紀守法（但是雅思裡面不能出現law，用rule代替），宣揚核心價值積極向上的人。——這需要教育。

而教育無非兩塊內容：知識技能和素質教育。（記住這兩點，首段開頭會用到）

教育的實施者：家長和學校（政府/社會）

因此要培養出一個對社會有用的一份子要從以上兩方面著手：

1. 家長告訴孩子們應該成為一個怎麼樣的人，在社會發生什麼樣的作用。（可能會說學校也能做到這一點，但是學校，一個老師往往要面對一大批的孩子，細枝末節的道德思想灌輸從小培養，是需要依靠家庭的。）
2. 學校給孩子一個融入社會的環境。在這裡不單單學習知識，也給予了孩子一個平台學習和他人交往。

1) parents:

A good parent should help children to know what is important in life, what role they will play in their world, and how they are expected to behave.

2) school:

Teachers should help children learn how to cooperate with others and how to contribute to the life of their community.

結構：中立

正文：

首段:

A child』s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. （知識技能）It has always included teaching the next generation how to be a good members of society. （素質教育）I think it should be the responsibility of both the parents and the schools.

（如果這道題給的是「技能教育」，可以用素質教育引出：A child』s education has never been about teaching the next generation how to be a useful members of the society only. It has always included learning the information and basic skill.）

主體段：

In order to be a good members of any society, the individual should respect and obey to the rules of his or her community and（並列謂語） shares his or her values.（開頭先說明，怎麼樣才算一個好的社會公民，需要什麼條件。）

Educating children to understand the need to obey the rules and respect others always begins in the home and（並列謂語） is the widely thought to be the responsibility of parents.They will certainly be the first to help children what is important in the life,how they are expected to the behave and what role they will play in the world.

（這一段將主體段的第一段respect and obey 表明這些是父母家庭的責任）

However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society can not be achieved in home.（過渡，需要學校）

At school, children will experience studying and learning with people from whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society.

This experience should teach them how to cooperate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.

（第二段 學習弘揚value system需要學校，學校在其中提供了平台，讓孩子認識不同社會背景的peers，並且教他們如何彼此間友好相處）

結尾：

But to be a valuable member of any community動詞不定式作主語 is not like learning a simple skill.

It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and並列句it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

（升華）

這篇文章環環相扣，值得花時間去理解背誦。

今天也是 元氣滿滿的一天-w-。