雅思寫作筆記——（四）influence題型 例3-1

來自專欄雅思寫作記錄-w-

Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

（以後關鍵詞直接加粗）

話題：教育+傳媒

題型判斷：influence （對明星的報道對孩子是否有壞的影響）

Ps:如果在口語考試中，celebrities可以是明星，科學家，甚至有名的朋友之類的。但是在寫作中的celebrity就是明星，不是科學家。如果他要考科學家，會出現科學，技術之類的關鍵點的。

這道題的寫作方向其實有兩個，可以用中立結構，也可以用側重（今天寫的是側重）。事實上這類的題目更適合側重。一般，出現在考題里的社會問題，都是希望我們再思考名人報道對未成年的影響，影響在哪個方面？（關於教育類前面有兩道題，一個是internet和schooling，另一個是 a good members of society）

未成年的影響：

1. 先影響孩子的言行舉止（這就是為什麼需要老師，需要父母）
2. 長期就會影響認知
3. 職業認知職業影響

正文：

It is easy to notice that there is an increasingly amount of media coverage of celebrities. Some people are worried that it might have undesirable impacts on children. Generally, I have the same concern.

Amount 用於不可數 coverage/information

Number 用於可數

One of the possible negative influence of celebrities is the fact that children who crave attention might imitate their misbehaviors. Today, celebrity scandals are just as likely to receive publicity as celebrity achievements. Many famous people have received more attention for their misuse of drugs and alcohol than for their successes on the stage or in sports. In this case, children might confuse proper behaviors with vile ones.

（影響行為。現在很多的明星，被大家熟知，不是因為他的作品，而是花邊新聞....）

Too much exposure to the coverage of celebrities might lead to a distorted view of the world to children. The superficial excitement of celebrity gossip may be at the expense/cost of news about serious events and issues that have a more profound effect on people』s lives.

（過多的負面報道對孩子對世界的認知有不良的影響。孩子沉迷八卦而減少了對「正事的關注」）

The negative influence of celebrities on children can also be seen in children』s career aspirations. These days, young people are much more likely to see themselves as potential sports stars or entertainers. The prevalence of these figures in the mass media may convey the impression that such positions are plentiful. Children may be developing unrealistic expectations that they will also become rich and famous.

（孩子對職業也會產生一定的誤會。）

結尾:

In summary, although some celebrities have contributed efforts to charity organizations, the cult of celebrity may be affecting children in a number of undesirable ways. It is important that children should be taught to critically evaluate what they see in the media so that they can form a more realistic view of acceptable behaviors, society and indeed themselves.

（influence經常用「be doing」正在影響 他是層層遞增的）

Influence題型最重要的重點在於影響，影響在哪裡，這個要體現出來。

這篇筆記整理的有點亂，雖然我自己看的懂...大概是剛剛喝了兩口皮久...腦子有點不大拎清...

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