雅思寫作筆記——（二）prediction題型 例1-2

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Prediction題型1-2

Schooling is no longer necessary, since more and more information is accessible on the Internet, and students can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

關鍵詞：is no longer necessary，school，internet

題型判斷：prediction（這道題目是school和internet的比較，認為school的教育不重要的因為可以有internet代替，讓你討論有沒有代替的可能，也就是趨勢。而一般出現這種只是多一種選擇的情況，比如1-1中便利食物的出現只不過是給人們的生活多一項選擇，不可能完全替代的。同理在這道題目中，計算機internet的出現只不過給學習多一項選擇或者輔助，是不可能完全取代的，所以是側重去寫）

題目話題：科技類+教育類（教育的對象：student 教育的方式：school/internet 教育的目的：培養孩子與他人交往的能力，學習知識...）

中心思想：學校教育是很有必要的，internet雖然很強但是還是有不能完全取代school的地方。

結構：首段——讓步——主體段——結尾（側重）

首段：參照1-1改寫+自己的觀點

讓步：internet帶來的好處。從internet上可以獲取各種各樣的知識，掌握了用計算機搜尋信息進行學習對學生們來說是一大優勢，然而這並不代表internet可以擔任學校的角色，更不必說取代了。

主體段：1. 學校的教育在一個人的成長中不可少。不單單提供了一個平台，給孩子們學習知識，還給了一個讓學生學習品格和思想的環境。

1. 在這樣一個學習生活的環境中，孩子們會受到老師們的鼓勵，小夥伴們的幫助，這對他們是有幫助的。
2. 他們會去學習如何融入集體而不喪失自我，將去學習如何提升自己的批判思維汲取他人給的意見。而這些是internet不能做到的。
3. 另外，在面臨大量的信息中，學校教會他們如何辨別是非，判斷哪些是好的信息哪些是壞的信息。

結尾：因此，不管怎麼說，學校的教育始終在扮演著重要的角色，internet可以成為輔助（互補）。

正文：

首段：

It is easy to notice that there is increasingly more information accessible on the internet. Some people have predicted that, with the fast pace of technological advances, traditional ways of education will disappear. In this essay, i will argue that this is less likely to happen.

(Today increasingly more information is available on the Internet, so some people tend to believe that students can study at home instead of going to schools any more. Generally, I hold a different opinion. )也可以這樣寫，時間趕的話練一種表達就好嘞...其實還有一種是情景帶入法，但是寫不好，就算了吧...

讓步：

In today『s world, the internet is the master key to almost all the knowledge available. Therefore, a good understanding of computer technology will give student an edge in searching of and making use of information for their studies. However, it does not necessarily mean that the internet can play all the roles as school does, not to mention taking its place.

主體段：

School education always is and remain essential for one』s growing up because it is not only a platform to impact knowledge but also a stage to educate an individual about values and attitudes.

Studying and living in an environment where the student will be encouraged by their teachers and accompanied by their peers benefits them in a wider range.

They are more likely to know how to be themselves while fitting in a group, and how to develop their critical thinking while learning to take advice from others. On the other hand, the internet can hardly sever these functions.

And when student are well exposed to all kinds of information provided by the huge database of internet. It is judgment that the student learn from school that helps them distinguish between goodness and evilness.

結尾：

Overall, I believed that the school will continue playing the leading role in education, and internet will be a complementary part of it.

相關句型/短語/辭彙

（1）

It is easy to notice that（這個1-1有詳細就不展開了）

（2）

Is a master key to...

With the fast pace of technological advances...

Give sb. edge in...（給某人...的優勢）

（3）

Not only...but also...

（4）

有點意思的句子用斜體標出來了...

今天的考題剛好是prediction 討論books和computer的，這道題趁著熱乎整理一下吧-w-。

今天也是元氣滿滿的一天。