挑6個款式的長難句，讓我們雅思寫作上6— 從雅思考官範文里借鑒如何寫長難句

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從劍橋4到劍橋12，一共20篇大作文的滿分範文。對於範文的發布，我發現雅思官方是小氣的，誇張到最近這幾年出的劍橋11和劍橋12，沒有發布一篇大作文的範文。於是這20篇大作文的滿分範文便成了對自己有要求的學生的bible。但是根據我很多學生的反映：

「JILL老師，這20篇範文，我看不太懂。」

「JILL老師，我把這些文章都背出來了，但是我還是不會寫。」

「我覺得我這個水平的學生看這種9分的文章幫助不大。」

根據同學們的反映，我覺得有必要把雅思官方滿分範文的學習方法寫出來，幫助更多的烤鴨。我們可以從4個角度來學習範文：1，思路；2.結構；3. 用詞；4. 長難句分析。

今天我具體來講一下第4個角度，長難句的學習和借鑒。根據雅思官方的評分標準，我們來看看為什麼寫大作文需要寫長難句？幾分的學生需要寫？寫幾個就能拿高分？

在「語法結構和準確性」這一個打分項目里，關於長難句的這個部分的官方解釋如下：

9分：uses a wide range of structures

with full flexibility and accuracy;

8分：uses a wide range of structures

7分：uses a variety of complex structures

6分：uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms

5分：uses only a limited range of structures；attempts

complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences

區別我已經用紅色強調出來了。簡而言之，就是：

5分＝用了一丟丟複雜結構，想要寫，但是寫的不準確；

6分＝混合了簡單句和複合句

7分＝使用了各種款式的複合句

8分＝使用了更多的各種款式的複合句

9分＝不僅用了各種款式的複合結構，準確性和靈活性還特別好

那麼最重要的兩個詞就出來了：「用了」「各種款式的」。做到這兩點，就是8分了。大部分同學的寫作單科要求是6分，所以我們也不用寫太多複合句，只需要「混合簡單句和複合句」就好了。從數量上來看，一篇250個字的大作文一般12-14句話，那就意味著寫6句複合句，就可以上6了！以下為你統計了考官愛用的複合句，你挑幾個款式，運用到你的文章中，就不枉費我沒有吃晚飯在這裡碼字了。

那麼有什麼款式可以借鑒呢？（拿起小本本！超乾的乾貨來啦！！！）

有定語從句，表語從句，狀語從句（原因狀語從句，時間狀語從句，條件狀語從句，讓步狀語從句），同位語從句，主語從句，狀語前置，句中插入短語，倒裝句，強調句，with結構狀語前置，平行結構，目的狀語前置，虛擬語氣，指代etc.

1. 賓語從句

Of course, factors such as loving relationships,

good health, the skills to learn a living and a peaceful environment all

contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean

that people without these conditions cannot be happy. (劍橋4) (這個句型基本可以借鑒到任何一篇文章好嘛！)

This means that the children grow up without consideration for

others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes

from. (劍橋4) (這個句型基本可以借鑒到任何一篇文章好嘛！)

This may have a negative effect on how they learn.

2. 定語從句

Like self-awareness, this is also very

difficult to achieve, but I think these are two factors

that may be the most important for achieving happiness. (劍橋4)

But I think the solution to the problem lies

with the families, who need to be more aware of

the future consequences of spoiling their children. (劍橋4)

3. 狀語從句

When they get to school age, they have not learnt

any self control or discipline. (時間狀語從句)(劍橋4)

If they could raise them to be considerate of

others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would

benefit. （條件狀語從句）(這個句型基本可以借鑒到任何一篇文章好嘛！)

While some people think this may be damaging to a child』s development, or to a child』s relationship with his or her parents, in fact there are many advantages to having school experience at a young age. (讓步狀語從句裡面夾著賓語從句) (這個句型基本可以借鑒到任何一篇文章好嘛！)

4. 表語從句

Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially. (這個句型基本可以借鑒到任何一篇文章好嘛！)

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden

their horizons. (萬能嘛！)

5. 同位語從句

The reason for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. (同位語從句裡面夾定語從句)

6. 主語從句

But whether these

characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual

surely depend on whether the circumstances allow such a

development. (主語從句＋賓語從句)

7. 強調句

It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person』s personality and indicates how

that personality develops. （強調句的結構是it is＋（強調部分） that／who＋。。。）

8. 虛擬語氣

If this were not

true, then we would be

able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they

were born. (虛擬語氣裡面夾著定語從句，你找得到嗎？虛擬語氣和條件狀語從句那麼像，你知道區別是什麼嗎？)

9. 倒裝句

Only in this way can this problem be

effectively solved.

以上是劍橋考官範文的複合句或者複雜句的一點典型代表句式，並不是全部。希望你可以從中學會幾個容易上手的句型，然後運用到你的文章。挑6個款式的長難句，讓我們雅思寫作上6！

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