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誰都知道寫作文句式單調不是好事,但卻很少有人能參透到底怎樣才能讓句子豐富多樣。

傳說中的句式多樣化一直高深莫測,讓考生們相當鬱悶。

如果你的寫作單項目標是6.5或者7分的話,請把下面這些劍橋範文變化句式的不宣之秘熟練掌握並且積極使用。

對於只需要考6分的同學,如果今天還不是很累,也不妨很快地看看以便有個印象。

考官們,不好意思,你們「壓箱底」的寶貝已經被出賣了！

考官範文「騷」操作—— 14種句式花樣變化技巧！

Part 01

A. 句首狀語提前

雅思寫作里狀語提前是一種相當拿分的句式,遺憾的是很多同學卻沒有意識到:所謂狀語提前就是把一個由副詞、介詞、現在分詞或者動詞不定式形成的小短語放在句首。

這種句式最大的好處就是在一堆長句子里突然出現一個短語,讓句子間產生一種長短結合的節奏感。劍橋考官範文中的狀語提前可以用「海量」一詞來形容,請大家認真體會下面的劍橋例句中放在句首的狀語所產生的效果:

Because it is more likely(更有可能的) now that both parents work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age.

Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school(幼兒園,與 nursing home意思不同) when they are much younger.

Overall，think an ability to keep clear perspective (if)in life is a more essential (E

核心的) factor in achieving happiness.

Unfortunately, professionals from other fields who make a much greater contribution to human society, are paid so much less that it is hard to disagree with the statement.

In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.

Part 02

B. 句中插入短語

同樣的道理,在雅思作文中,句子中間也經常可以引入一個小短語,讓長句子顯得更加靈活。

請看下面的例句——

This will affect the job market, which, after all, is a key target in any economic plan

Feelings about ones job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important.

Sport stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the next younger, more energetic generation.

C. 句尾用短語結束

劍橋範文中有時也會在一句話的結尾安插一個小短語,給過長的句子增添一點「親力"。例如

A person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect(請注意 respect在這裡不是「尊敬"的意思,而是指「某方面」,也可以用 in this regard來表達)

Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labour relations may be poor, which leads to resentment(仇恨) and insecurity(不安全感) rather than to job satisfaction

A sense of fulfillment(成就感) is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to society or the economy as a whole.

D. 句尾用短語結束

副詞在英語中可以用來修飾形容詞、動詞甚至全句。由於其用法的高度靈活性,劍橋考官頻頻調用副詞來豐富自己的句式。

請看下面的實例:

It often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in a short time cannot possibly be justified(站得住腳的) by the amount of work they do.

The gap between their earnings and those of people who work less selfishly for the good of ociety has been widening

Part 03

E. 倒裝句

這種語法現象很多同學都學過，但卻往往忘記在雅思作文里使用。不過考官們可從來沒忘記：

Only in this way can this problem be effectively solved.

We can see that not only are there very large differences between these economies, but that these gaps are widening (s)3 p. 163)

Strange as it may seem, parentsattention sometimes hinders（阻礙)students academic development.

Be it Clint Eastwood, David Beckham or Gordon Brown(英國現任首相), one individual cannot have done all alone what seems to have been achieved by himself.

(這裡的 Be it是一種很特殊的倒裝形式,即使是指人也用it,意思是:不管是…,在英式英語中時常可見)

F.強調句

用it is...that,或者it is…...who.這兩種強調句式,類似於中文的"正是……導致

請看例句

☆ It is the interaction(相互影響) of the two that shapes a person s personality and dictates

1r However, it is only those who reach the very top of their profession who can get these

F. 強調句

用It is....that,或者It is…who....這兩種強調句式,類似於中文的"正是……導致.

請看例句

It is the interaction(相互影響) of the two that shapes a person s personality and dictates

However, it is only those who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salaries.

(請注意這個例句里的 those who中的這個Who並不是強調句的標誌詞,後一個who才是。是不是聽起來有點像繞口令.....

PART 04

G. 虛擬語氣

使用虛擬語氣是比較高的要求,但其實說白了就是用過去的時態表示現在或者將來的事情,表示語氣弱化。在雅思作文中提建議的時候,虛擬語氣相當常用。

下面都是虛擬語氣的應用實例:

Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive,and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

High quality nursery schools could be established #t 3z) that would support families

more in terms of raising the next generation

If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.(請注意在虛擬語氣中,this和that後面都用

were而不是was)

H. 長短句結合

如果一篇文章里全都是超級無敵長難句,將可能會讓考官的心情變得十分沉重。長短句結合反而會讓閱讀你的文章變成一種享受~

請看劍橋範文是如何為我們提供這種「享受」的

There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provided minimum and a maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee (預見)certain cases of exemptions(赦免）.

Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly，a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.

PART 05

I. 主被動交替

在國外大學裡,一些有潔癖的「叫獸」們非常反對在學術文章中使用被動語態。

但對於雅思作文這種比較短小的 essay來說,被動語態仍然是實現句式多樣化的好方法之一。

請看考官範文中的被動形式例句

Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.

Such professionals should be much better appreciated and better paid.

In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.

當然,也要注意不要過度使用被動語態。在雅思作文中被動形式只能是「小菜」,而"大餐」則仍然是主動語態。

J. 改變詞性

Cambridge的範文作為ELTs範文中的極品,經常會使用同一個單詞的不同形式來獲得多樣的效果。

劍橋範文中的詞形改變方法竟然達到了三種——

（1）請認真比較

變形前

People are concerned (擔心)because the traditional values are gradually disappearing.

變形後

People are concerned about the gradual disappearance of the traditional values

PART 06

K . of+抽象名詞

這也是國內考生很不熟悉而劍橋考官卻能用得相當精準的一種結構。

「(be)+of+抽象名詞」的意思相當於其中的那個名詞所對應的形容詞,用來說明某種特徵或屬性。常跟的抽象名詞 importance/help/value use /interest/ significance/necessity quality /impact等等。

比如

The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion. (其中的 topic of discussion就表示 much-discussed的意思)

Of crucial importance is, in my view, how we define (X)"responsible for bringing the children up".(注意這句話同時也用了倒裝)

L. 通過比較製造出變化

劍橋範文中還經常通過比較不同事物來調動一些特殊句型,比如too….to..(太……而不....）；The+比較級,the+比較級.....這些句型大家早就學過,但卻「不屑」於在雅思作

文中使用,而在這方面劍橋考官們是絕對的實用主義者。

請看劍橋實例:

The more relaxed the learners, the better their language acquisition(語言習得).(這個特殊句式的一大特色是可以省略掉句中的謂語)

PART 07

M . 括弧也瘋狂

考官有時候也會喜歡用括弧來打斷長難句的單調感

比如——看劍4中的一個例句:

te By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives( the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc)and what is not (a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.）

類似的在學術作文中完全可以接受而國內考生卻極少使用的標點還有冒號:與破折號——

N. the+形容詞

地道英語中還有一種常見的習慣用法,是用the加上一個形容詞,泛指某一類人,比如

the rich, the wealthy, the poor, the needy, the elderly the unemployed, the weak, the neglected(被忽視的群體)。

例如:

One of the most effective ways to teach children about responsibilities is to encourage them to care for the poor and the need.

劍橋考官用來實現句式多樣性的「看家本領」全都為大家揭露在本節中了。需要寫作高分的童鞋們請一定認真研讀這些方法並多加練習,因為它們不僅對考雅思極為有用,而且對大家今後在海外的學習或工作中豐富自己的英語句式也會提供很大幫助！

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