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很多雅思考生問我如何提升雅思寫作分數到7分或者更高,這個確實不是一個簡單可以回答的問題,但是幸運的是這裡有一些小建議可以供你參考。
01 在雅思寫作中,我們需要使用正式的學術語言,所以盡量避免頻繁使用較為口語化的表達,如really, so , a lot , very.
例子:
1.Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is veryhard.
=>Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS isdifficult.
2.Robot-driven car is really controversial
=> Robot-driven car is controversial
3.A lot of IELTS learners share their great tips on IELTS writing, speaking on IELTS Material website.
=> Many / A great number of / A multitude of IELTS learners……
02 避免頻繁使用 There is / There are;我們在寫作的時候,可以使用一個簡單句直戳重點,去掉多餘的單詞。
例子:
There are many issues that students have to face at university
=> Students face a multitude of issues at university
03 確保句子準確度的前提下,寫出多樣化句式;在眾多句型中,複合複雜句是最難的,不過就算你語法基礎薄弱,嘗試用一系列的簡單句、複雜句和複合句相結合來寫一篇文章,也可以得到一個很好的分數。這個關鍵就在於句子類型和句子長度要靈活多變,使得文章自然流暢。看一個下面的例子:
Firstly, children watch too much TV. It』s bad for their health. It can make them addicted. They will spend too much time indoors. This can make them fat.
這個例子就是句子太短,我們可以把句子連接在一起,構成一個複雜複合句。
=>Firstly, children watch too much TV, which is bad for their health. This habit can cause them to become addicted, resulting in them spending too much time indoors and thus getting fat.
04 牢記地道固定搭配;大家在準備雅思考試的時候總會學習很多的辭彙,這對於我們提高英文理解是十分重要的,然而有些時候,「知道一個詞語的含義」和「會使用它」還是有一定區別的。當大家學習辭彙的時候,一定要注意的是什麼樣子的搭配會常常在一起。
例子:
1. Verb + thought:
Spare a thought for 想到,替……著想
Spare a thought for all those who are homeless on a cold night like this.
想到那些在寒冷的夜晚中無家可歸的人。
Hear ones thought 聆聽……的想法
Have you given the new proposal any thought yet? We』re keen to hear your thought
你有沒有考慮新提議了嗎?我們渴望聽到你的想法嗎?
The thought occurs to someone 某人有了一個想法
The thought just occurs to me that it』s mum』s birthday tomorrow and we haven』t got her a card.
我突然間想到明天是我媽媽的生日,我們還沒有給她卡片呢。
Gather one』s thought 理清思路
The President was taken aback by the question and took a minute to gather his thoughts.
總統被這個問題嚇了一跳,並用一分鐘的時間來理清思路。
2. Noun + preposition + thought:
great deal of thought 很多想法,大量思考
Shirley doesn』t devote a great deal of thought to her appearance.
雪莉對她的外表沒有太多想法。
freedom of thought 思想自由
Some places don』t encourage freedom of thought.
有些地方不鼓勵思想自由。
school of thought 思想派別
One school of thought contends that modern man originated in Central Africa.
某學派認為:現代人類起源於非洲中部。
train of thought 思路,思緒
Sorry, where was I?
I』ve lost my train of thought.
對不起,我說到哪裡了?我剛剛沒了思路
05 不要在學術寫作中使用縮略形式
Don』t => do not
Can』t => cannot
Mustn』t => must not
Couldn』t => could not
Wouldn』t => would not
Isn』t => is not
Haven』t => have not
Hasn』t => has not
06 清楚句子組成:英文句子結構分類詳解;了解簡單句和複雜句式的區別很重要,大家不需要知道術語,但是需要有能力自己完成一個句子的寫作,了解以下句子類型可以幫助你避免許多基本的寫作錯誤。
片斷句(不完整的句子)
這是雅思考生經常犯的錯誤:缺少句子成分的句子片斷是不可以單獨成句的,因為它並不具備成為一個完整的獨立分句的要素。
記住,一個英文句子至少要有主語和謂語。
有時看起來像一個句子,但是當我們仔細研究時會發現它缺少了許多很關鍵的成分,因此它並不能成為一個獨立的句子。
例子:
1.The doctor worked round the clock. Operating on the boy.
2. As India has entered the WTO. The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.
我們怎麼改正這些句子呢?
=>The doctor worked around the clock, operating on the boy.
=>As India has entered the WTO, the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.
兩個獨立主句之間用逗號連接,這是很多考生會犯的錯誤。記住,逗號不能連接兩個獨立的句子,需要添加連接詞來使它變完整,或者使用分號或者連接副詞。
更重要的一點,想在雅思寫作中拿高分,你不需要對所有標點符號的使用都了如指掌,了解逗號和句號的使用方法就足夠了。
例子:
1. Van Gogh is a world-famous artist his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
2.Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, his most famous poem is Howl.
我們怎麼改正這些句子呢?
=>Van Gogh is a world-famous artist whose paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
=>Van Gogh is a world-famous artist. His paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
=>Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, whose most famous poem is Howl.
=>Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet. His most famous poem is Howl.
比如:The dog was hungry, he wanted some food.
我們可以用很多方法來改正它:
=>The dog was hungry; he wanted some food.
=>The dog was hungry. He wanted some food.
=>The dog was hungry, and he wanted some food.
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