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1. Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(agree類，2018/7/28)

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It is not uncommon to see some convicts, after having been reformed, become productive members in society. While some people therefore argue that they are the best people to educate students about the risks of committing crimes, I believe it is the most effective to have police officers shoulder the task.

Reformed ex-prisoners can be persuasive by telling stories from their own experience. They know exactly what it is like to be punished by law. For example, they could share with students how helpless life in prison is and how guilty they are after realizing the huge mistakes they have made. As a result, by learning from their experience, students would be deterred from breaking the law. Alternatives of crime education cannot compare with this in that ex-inmates are living examples showing the tremendous power of law. This is why rehabilitated ex-prisoners could play a crucial role in transmitting the risks of law violation.

However, I believe policemen would exert the most powerful impact on the youth in the crime-related education. They are official figures of authorities, who are trustworthy and respected. For instance, they could display pictures or films of prison life as well as inform students of the irreversible harm to victims. Consequently, the young would be discouraged from becoming law violators. On the contrary, students may hold discriminations against ex-criminals, thus taking their words lightly. Therefore, police officers are indispensable in spreading the knowledge of committing crimes.

In conclusion, although ex-criminals who have become productive citizens have an important role to play in educating students about the risks of perpetrating crimes, they can only complement the efforts of police officers. I would suggest that they two collaborate in some cases to achieve the best results of education. (290字)