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Some businesses find that when new employees join them after finishing their education, they lack basic interpersonal skills such as the ability to work with their colleagues as part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?（混合類，2018/7/21，2011年舊題）

連續上周四的問題解決類的混合問法，也是今年的第三次

大作文四大基本類中的混合類（問題解決），關鍵：

1.審題清楚，確定關鍵信息？

2.解決方法對應起因，舉例說明更生動

3.我在16句範文中列出每一步的用途，主體段思路思維圖如下：

4.中間段落idea的拓展有兩種方法:explain和example，其中explain包括三種：

原因（問自己why？），結果（問自己so？），對比（跟以前對比或/ 問自己if not？

5. 劃線部分為可借鑒詞伙

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Employers are often heard complaining about how disappointing new entrants are in terms of interpersonal skills. There are two factors leading to this worrying trend and measures could be taken to address the problem.

Both individuals themselves and schools are to blame for this upsetting situation. On the individual level, many students now spend a large amount of time in front of screens, leaving little time to reach out to the outer world. Online virtual world is filled with so much thrill that students are found increasingly addicted to it, resulting in a deficiency in face to face communication skills. On the broader school level, exam-led education places high emphasis on academic achievement and low on practices. As a result, students who have newly entered in the workplace often experience difficulties in interaction with their workmates. These are the two contributing factors of declining interpersonal skills.

In light of the above causes, two tactics could be adopted. First, while in school, students should engage themselves in various extracurricular activities such as joining Student Union and societies. These activities are beneficial in diverting their attention from mobile devices and building up practical skills. Besides, schools should encourage students to integrate theories with practices. For example, group work, group presentations, internship programs could be promoted as means to train team work spirit. Such countermeasures would be effective in boosting communication skills.

In conclusion, the main responsibility for the deteriorating interpersonal skills should be taken by two parties. It would be wise for them both to make adjustments in face of the problem.(260字)