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People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the internet. They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is it a positive or negative development?

這是個很老的題目啦，想觀點相當輕鬆~

支持是個好事：

1. 不用來回上下班堵在路上

支持是個壞事：

1. 在線購物，特別是買衣服，可能購物體驗一般般
2. 在家工作，boss比較難監督啊

正文部分：

People can shop, work, and communicate with others at any place if they have access to the Internet. Personally speaking, it is a negative development.

Admittedly, the internet helps people save time in traffic effectively. Every day, employees need to spend a lot of time commuting to work, and if they are trapped in traffic congestion, they will waste much more time. However, with the assistance of the internet, they can chat with colleagues and clients online so that time will not be wasted in traffic any more. Nevertheless, shopping and communicating online may have some drawbacks.

To begin with, online shopping may not provide consumers with a satisfying shopping experience. When consumers go to some physical stores, they can try all clothes they want in stores and get advice from employees immediately. However, if consumers want to buy some clothes from some E-commerce business websites, such as Amazon.com, they cannot try clothes on, and there may not be salesmen who can help them choose suitable clothes. Then, some consumers may dislike clothes after clothes are sent to them, and they need to spend time returning those clothes.

In addition, working online may bring difficulties to employers when they want to monitor their employees. When employees go to their companies, employers can directly observe what their workers are doing. However, if all employees are given freedom to work at home, inevitably, not all employees will be so self-disciplined. As a result, enterprises profits may be reduced because employers cannot guarantee that all their employees focus on work.

To sum up, it may not be a positive development for people to shop, work and communicate on the Internet, considering that the shopping experience on the internet may be worse than that in local stores, and employers cannot supervise employees effectively.

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