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Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development? (2014.11.22 | 2017.11.11)

01 在線購物的優點

1.方便快捷：過去人們只能驅車到很遠的實體店購物 drive miles to a particular store；現在，人們只需要坐在電腦前面操作滑鼠和鍵盤 with a click of keyboards and mouse，貨物便會在很短的時間內郵寄上門 be delivered right to your door in a short time，並且以一個很低廉的價格 even at a lower price.

2.打破地域限制 geographic limitations , 給賣家帶來了更多的潛在客戶bring them more potential consumers. 零售商通過建立網店 set up online sites可以獲得更高的利潤 make more profits，同時能促進銷售promote their products，刺激製造業和經濟發展 stimulate manufacturing and economic growth.

02 在線購物的缺點

1.在線轉賬 online transactions 很多情況下會通過信用卡來支付 creadit cards，有的人不能有效的控制自己的"剁手"速度，導致信用卡透支 overdrew their bank accounts.

2.是否能夠保證交易安全值得商榷。病毒危害 virus threats 和受過良好訓練的黑客well-trained hackers，導致個人信息泄露 personal information leakage 和財產損失 drain ones accounts effortlessly.

參考範文

The advent of computers and the widespread use of the Internet have changed the way people perform everyday tasks. A new tendency is that online shops are taking the place of ( = replace) physical stores, as online shopping is increasingly gaining popularityamong masses of netizens.

This new trend of online shopping can benefit both individual shoppers and society as a whole. To begin with, convenience is very important in modern life and online deals prove highly efficient for consumers in this fast-paced society. In the past,people might need to travel miles to a particular store in order to buy a desired commodity; but nowadays, all can be done with an easy click on the keyboard and goods will be delivered right to your door in a short time, even at a lower price (對比論證). Also, due to no geographic limitations, goods can be dispatched to every corner of the world, which benefits more potential consumers. Besides, retailers gain more profits by setting up online shopping sites, a new channel to promote their goods, therefore stimulating manufacturing and economic growth in a benign circle.

Despite the positive impacts mentioned above, many people are concerned about the potential risks of this new mode of consumption. First, as theonline transactions are based on e-payment such as credit cards, people might spend money as much as they can and even overdraw their bank accounts. This impulsive consumption can lead to waste of money as well as resources of society. Security is another major concern. With increasingvirus threats and well-trained hackers, online bank transactions are well exposed to heavy loss as well as to great convenience. Some cunninghackers, for example, might take advantage of this information leakageand illegally drain ones account effortlessly.

In conclusion, I believe online shopping is an irreversible trend that has positive effect on both shoppers and national economy. As long as online shoppers are prudent while selecting goods and making payments with their e-cards, shopping online can be highly efficient and as well as a pleasure for them.

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