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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (2015.6.13)
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優點:跟父母住在一起能夠減輕年輕人的生活壓力 relieve young adults pressure.剛畢業的年輕人找一份體面的工作本就不易secure a decent job / employment,並且很多年輕人未必能適應獨立生活 adapt to an independent life.
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優點:父母擁有者豐富的社會經驗social experience,可以教職場新人new comer in working place如何處理人際關係interpersonal relationship和職業發展career development. 畢竟多數的年輕人面對工作的挑戰還是太過於na?ve, 而父母的經驗和指導對於他們十分有價值be of great value.
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缺點:一直跟父母住在一起肯定會有很多衝突,畢竟不是一個時代的人living in two different times.價值觀和生活方式很少有相似的地方。年輕人跟父母住的時間越長,他們對父母的依賴程度就越高 have a sentimental attachment to their parents excessively.當父母不能再提供的幫助的時候,他們很難開始獨立的生活,這對於他們的將來的發展是有很大危害的detrimental.
參考範文
Nowadays, an increasing number of adults choose to live with their parents after finishing their academic tasks and finding jobs. The overall effect of this phenomenon is negative, although the younger generation can get much help from their parents.
It is widely acknowledged that living with parents contributes to relieve young adults』 pressure. They bear great pressure from their work and study, and they are not willing to adapt to an independent life. Parents, especially the retired adults, are always ready to prepare everything for their children, helping them to concentrate on their work. In addition, young people canlearn much experience from their parents who are more experienced in dealing with interpersonal relationships and career development. As a new comer in the working arena, the young generation are too na?ve to manage their various challenges. Undoubtedly, it is of great value for them to live with their parents.
On the other hand, continuing to live with parents will unavoidably cause some conflicts. Growing up in two different times, the views and lifestylesbetween these two generations are less likely to be the same. With the passage of time, the family bond will be alienated. What』s worse, if the adults lead a life with parents for a long time, they are particularly likely tohave a sentimental attachment to their parents excessively. It will be increasingly difficult for them to start a new life when their parents cannot provide help any longer. It is detrimental for forming a new family in the future.
When considering the effects of living with parents on young generation, we can conclude that this lifestyle is not universally suitable for every individual. As to most young people, they had better to live independently in order to keep a harmonious relation with parents and a balance between work and life. (307 words)
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