雅思寫作高分經驗有哪些可以借鑒的？

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有很多同學考雅思作文的時候分數一直在原地踏步，甚至有一些同學掉分了！很多同學都不知道這麼樣才能提升分數。小編讓雅思寫作的老師給我們寫了一些得分重點！

1. Avoid really, so, a lot, very 避免使用really, so, a lot, very

在雅思寫作中，你需要使用學術語言，你的目標是正式和學術，所以你不要使用較為口語化的表達，如really, so , a lot and very.

舉一些例子:

（1）Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is very hard.=> Use a stronger word: Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is difficult.

（2）Robot-driven car is really controversial=> Robot-driven car is controversial

（3）A lot of IELTS learners share their great tips on IELTS writing, speaking on IELTS Material website.=> Many/A great number of/ A multitude of IELTS learners……

2. Avoid 「There is / There are」 避免使用 There is / There are

當你在寫作的時候，努力將你的想法用一種簡潔的方法呈現出來，有些詞語是不需要的，這樣你的句子可以更加直戳重點。

例子:

There are many issues that students have to face at university=> Students face a multitude of issues at university

3. Vary your sentence length 句子長度多樣化

如果你知道不同的句子類型，你就可以試著多多練習。在眾多句型中，複合複雜句是最難的，不過就算你不懂這個語法，嘗試用一系列的簡單句，複雜句，和複合句相結合來寫這篇文章，你也可以得到一個很好的分數。這個關鍵就在於句子類型和句子長度要靈活多變，這樣你的文章也會比較自然。

看一個下面的例子：

（1）Firstly, children watch too much TV. It』s bad for their health. It can make them addicted. They will spend too much time indoors. This can make them fat.

這個例子就是句子太短，你可以把句子連接在一起，會發現得到一個更加耐看的版本。

（2）Firstly, children watch too much TV, which is bad for their health. This habit can cause them to become addicted, resulting in them spending too much time indoors and thus getting fat.

4. Remember collocation 牢記固定搭配

學生們在準備雅思考試的時候總會學習很多的辭彙，這對於我們提高英文理解是十分重要的，然而有些時候，「知道一個詞語的含義」和「會使用它」還是有一定區別的。

在文章中學習一個單詞會使得你在使用這個詞時更加容易。當你學習辭彙的時候，一定要注意的是什麼樣子的搭配會常常在一起。

我們來舉幾個例子：

（1）

Verb + thought:

Spare a thought for 想到，替……著想

Spare a thought for all those who are homeless on a cold night like this.

想到那些在寒冷的夜晚中無家可歸的人。

（2）

Hear ones thought 聆聽……的想法

Have you given the new proposal any thought yet? We』re keen to hear your thought

你有沒有考慮新提議了嗎?我們渴望聽到你的想法嗎?

（3）

The thought occurs to someone

某人有了一個想法

The thought just occurs to me that it』s mum』s birthday tomorrow and we haven』t got her a card.

我突然間想到明天是我媽媽的生日，我們還沒有給她卡片呢。

（4）

Gather one』s thought

理清思路

The President was taken aback by the question and took a minute to gather his thoughts.

總統被這個問題嚇了一跳，並用一分鐘的時間來理清思路。

（5）

Noun + preposition + thought:

great deal of thought

很多想法，大量思考

Shirley doesn』t devote a great deal of thought to her appearance.

雪莉對她的外表沒有太多想法。

（6）

freedom of thought

思想自由

Some places don』t encourage freedom of thought.

有些地方不鼓勵思想自由。

（7）

school of thought

思想派別

One school of thought contends that modern man originated in Central Africa.

某學派認為：現代人類起源於非洲中部。

（8）

train of thought

思路，思緒

Sorry, where was I? I』ve lost my train of thought.

對不起，我說到哪裡了？我剛剛沒了思路。

5. Do not use Contractions in academic writing 不要在學術寫作中使用縮略形式

Don』t => do not

Can』t => cannot

Mustn』t => must not

Couldn』t => could not

Wouldn』t => would not

Isn』t => is not

Haven』t => have not

Hasn』t => has not

6. Know the sentence types 知道句子類型

了解簡單句和複雜句式的區別很重要，你不需要知道術語，但是你需要有能力自己完成一個句子的寫作，了解以下句子類型可以幫助你避免許多基本的寫作錯誤。

（1）SENTENCE FRAGMENTS: 片斷句（不完整的句子）

這是雅思考生經常犯的錯誤：缺少句子成分的句子片斷是不可以單獨成句的，因為他並不具備成為一個完整的獨立分句的要素。

記住，一個簡單句就是一個合格的獨立分句，它由3要素組成：

1. A subject

2. A verb

3. A complete thought

主語，謂語，和一個完整的思路。

有時看起來像一個句子，但是當我們仔細研究時會發現它缺少了許多很關鍵的成分，因此它並不能成為一個獨立的句子。

例子:

? The doctor worked round the clock. Operating on the boy.

? As India has entered the WTO. The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

我們怎麼改正這些句子呢?

=> The doctor worked around the clock, operating on the boy.

=> As India has entered the WTO, the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

（2）RUN-ON SENTENCES: 粘連句

粘連句包含著兩個或更多的主句，他們連在一起，沒有標點分隔(逗號、分號、句號等)。我們在說話的時候經常使用這樣的粘連句，但是我們可以用停頓來表述清楚含義。而在寫文章的時候，我們需要用標點符號來分隔我們的句子，讓它有更明確的表達含義。

【逗號誤接句】

就是兩個獨立主句之間用逗號連接，這是很多考生會犯的錯誤。記住，逗號不能連接兩個獨立的句子，你需要添加連接詞來使它變完整，或者使用分號或者連接副詞。

更重要的一點，想在雅思寫作中拿高分，你不需要對所有標點符號的使用都了如指掌，了解逗號和句號的使用方法就足夠了。

例子:

? Van Gogh is a world-famous artist his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

? Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, his most famous poem is Howl.

我們怎麼改正呢?=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist whose paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist. His paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist; his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, whose most famous poem is Howl.

=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet. His most famous poem is Howl.

=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet; his most famous poem is Howl.

那正如我們可以看到的，不僅僅只有一個方法來改正錯誤，但是一定要根據句子最最準確的含義來改正。

（3）COMMA SPLICES:逗號誤接句

這一點在前面已經強調了，要十分小心在用逗號鏈接兩個句子時，要避免前後兩個句子都出現謂語動詞。

比如：

? The dog was hungry, he wanted some food.

我們可以用很多方法來改正它：

=> The dog was hungry; he wanted some food.

=> The dog was hungry. He wanted some food.

=> The dog was hungry, and he wanted some food.

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