一步一步搞定雅思寫作（72）之幫助他人

來自專欄 熊貓的雅思寫作

我知道你們等這篇雅思寫作的範文等得不耐煩了哈哈，因為這次的考題確實不是那麼容易，再加上大作文的加成，這周考試的同學運氣確實有點點差......

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is that it gives them the opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Brainstorming部分，支持題目觀點的話就說：

1. 有錢能使鬼推磨啊，沒錢你咋幫助別人呢

不同意題目的觀點：

1. 自己賺的錢，自己有權力決定怎麼花，憑啥你說捐款最重要就最重要呢？
2. 又不是只能富人才能做慈善，幫助他人有很多種方式，錢不是萬能的~

正文部分：

Some people argue that the most advantage when people become rich is that they can help others in need, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, affluent people can afford the expense of helping others. Ordinary citizens work diligently to make a living, and if they generously donate all their salaries to people in need, their own quality of life will be reduced significantly. Comparatively, some people, such as celebrities, politicians and pop stars, usually have wealth, and donating money to people in need will not cause a great economic burden on them. Therefore, wealth enables people to help others without too much economic pressure.

Nevertheless, it is not proper to force all wealthy people to help paupers since they deserve a right to enjoy a high-quality life. A lot of people make painstaking efforts to earn money, and when they finally achieve their own goals and have wealth, they have the right to use money in any way they like. For example, taking a world tour costs a large amount of money, but it enables people to learn more about the real world. Spending money on helping others is an optimal choice, but linking wealth with helping others is actually a kind of moral coercion.

In addition, people can help others even though they do not have a large amount of money. Money is crucial, but not everything can be tackled by money. For example, some old people may feel lonely if their children do not stay with them, and spending some time talking with these old people can function to relieve their loneliness. In other words, people in need can be helped in several ways , and moneys function should not be exaggerated.

To sum up, being rich should not be directly linked with helping others, since people have the freedom to spend money they earn, and donating money is not the only way to help others.

個人水平有限，如有意見，敬請反饋+捉蟲哈~

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