雅思寫作展開段落的方式 (下)

來自專欄 馬哥雅思作文批改日記

第二種展開方式, 一段一觀點

First of all, a workplace designed for adults is normally shortage of child - friendly facilities. Desks and chairs are too high for a child; the light switches are installed on the walls unreachable by children; also emergency training and facilities such as phones are only provided to adults.

說白了就是觀點句 + 支撐

相對於泛泛而談的主題句, 觀點句表達的意思更準確.

主題句說的是有什麼, 而觀點句說的是是什麼

1. Distance learning programmes bring merits. (這是主題句, 強調有好處.)
2. Distance programmes require less tuition fees. (這是觀點句, 說好處之一是便宜)

怎麼寫支撐

1. 舉例: 最多同學使用的方法, 所給例子就是用的這個辦法.

2. 原因: 次常用

Distance programmes require less tuition fees. This is because such programmes is saved expense on campus facilities. [通常要加上意義, 以是邏輯完整(字數足夠)]The inexpensive courses are meaningful as they supply more chances for the acquisition of knowledge.

[這種寫法還可轉變為條件, 過程闡述等, 但本質上都是寫原因]

3. 邏輯闡述: 會不會使用邏輯闡述基本可以用來區分寫作水平的高低, 這是所有一段一觀點 寫作方法中最實用的一種, 卻也是最少被人掌握的一種.

其中對比寫法是最好用的之一

Distance programmes require less tuition fees. Courses given by distinguished scholars have been traditionally expensive. But in the era of instant communication, such courses are also available on the Internet at affordable prices as the tuition fees of distance programmes are exclusive of financial cost of campus facilities. This is meaningful as the expensive courses supply more chances for the acquisition of knowledge.

類似的還有讓步的寫法, 不過這個點我沒想出來讓步怎麼寫哈, 你們試試吧.

總結一下

[1] 第二種段落是一段一觀點

[2] 這種段落的結構是主題句 + 支撐

[3] 基本的支撐寫法包括 舉例, 原因和邏輯闡述 (邏輯闡述以對比和讓步為主). 幾種方式可以結合使用.

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