雅思4月21日真題大作文16句框架範文示範-科技類報告類

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Now people can communicate, shop and work online. It seems the there is no need for face to face communication. What are the positive and negative effects of internet development? (2018/4/22)

大作文四大基本類中的報告類，關鍵：

1. 報告類不需要表明觀點，就用啟下句代替

2. 必須兩面都寫，否則task response扣分

3. 我在16句範文中列出每一步的用途，中間段思維導圖如下：

4. 中間段落idea的拓展有兩種方法:explain 和example，其中explain包括三種：

原因（問自己why？），結果（問自己so？），對比（對比另一個選擇或/ 問自己如果不if not？）

5. 劃線部分為可借鑒 科技類「詞伙」

（2+6+6+2）

Technological advances have made it possible for us to embrace an internet era, where much routine work can be accomplished online(主題句). While many people are fanatic about the internet, extolling solely its virtues, others believe we gain as much as we lose from its boom(啟下).

On one hand, the proliferation of the internet has delivered countless benefits to individuals and society as a whole(主題句). On the individual level, life has been made considerably easier thanks to it(idea 1). The online community is playing an increasingly essential role since users can get in touch with one another or get their work done in a matter of minutes(why?). From the perspective of economy, the unemployment rate has been brought down because the internet is fully functioning as a medium of doing business(idea 2). A number of e-commerce websites such as Amazon are providing plenty of job oppotunities, which has transformed the traditional way of seeking a living(why?). These two factors account for the growing popularity of the internet(summary)..

On the other hand, the online world is far from perfect(主題句). The most noticable problem concerning the general public is that they are bombarded with information and some is highly misleading(idea 1).. As a result, susceptible users may be adversely affected by what they see and even commit crimes(so?). What is equally disturbing is the wide-spread addiction among teenagers(idea2).. Surrounded by various mobile devices with internet access, adolescents are tremendously distracted from their academic problems, which gives rise to a string of social problems(so?). Therefore, the internet, far from flawless, is posing risks to the whole society(summary).

In conclusion, although the evolution of internet is widely applauded for the advantages it has brought, it is also exerting negative influences(呼應啟下句). Given this, internet users would be sensible to remain prudent and self-disciplined so as not to be misguided or become addicted(advice). (305)