2018年暖心推送第40篇:2月24日雅思大作文真題詳析:私家車增多對個人的好處大於對環境的壞處嗎(社會環境類)

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2月24日的考題很簡單，私家車增多對個人的好處是不是大於對環境的壞處，是2016年9月15日的考試真題原題重現。可說的點很多，大家注意下我在範文中列舉的小例子，這樣可以使文章的論述更有說服力，語言也更好把握。

題目：As countries developed, more and more people buy an use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?

Private car ownership has been becoming increasingly universe（普遍=common） in many societies, and thus triggered a series of controversies(引發一系列的爭議), one of which is in bound up with（與----相關） the upsides and downsides(利弊=boons and banes) for individuals and eco-surroundings respectively. Personally, there is no rose without thorns(任何事情都有兩面性), likewise, there are both evidences in its benefits and drawbacks and it is difficult to say which is more obvious(雙邊觀點的一個套句說法).

對個人的好處：

Commonly, many car owners share the belief that（持有這樣的看法） by possessing a transportation tool, they are given more opportunity to travel as they please and as convenient as possible. For example, encountering（遇見） bad weathers, rather than waiting for public bus or walking a long way to take the underground in the heavy rain, we can drive car instantly（一---就---=as soon as） we walk out the door. Also, private cars make many leisure activities possible. In some cases, having a mountain climbing, holding a barbecue party or camping in countryside areas on weekends would rely, in great likelihood(很大可能), on self-driving（自駕） as public transportation may not be sufficiently provided in those areas.

對環境的壞處： 全球變暖，酸雨和霧霾都是我們不得不付出的代價，很多大城市都遭受這些問題的困擾

On the other hand, reaching the conclusion that there are advantages in private car use does not mean that（轉折句套句） we ignore its disadvantages recklessly. Instead, it should be equivalently pointed out（同樣提出來）. Global warming and other air problems such as acid rain and haze（酸雨和霧霾） are probably the main issues to be concerned. Due to car exhaust emissions(尾氣排放), many major cities are suffering the environmental problems mentioned above.

結尾可以適當題點小措施，後者給點建議。

However, instead of letting these problems be（讓這些問題隨其自然） and eventually deteriorate（惡化=get from bad to worse）, actions must be taken to tackle or at least mitigate(減輕=relieve) the threat to our life. I therefore believe that along with the bright sides of private car use, the dark ones still exist and it is everyones responsibility to solve it.

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