2018年4月21日雅思考試小作文範文~（IELTS 20180421)

Task1 of IELTS on April 21.2018

題目：

The graph below show the number of new homes built in a particular region in the UK from 2010 and shows the number predicted for 2020.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

坡姐讀題:

本次的小作文又回到了最熟悉的陌生人——線狀圖。坡姐遇到過很多學生，最怕的就是Line graph,怕的地方在於數據特別多，時間特別亂，不知道如何有邏輯的寫出需要的數據，很多時候不知道如何下手。

在審題的時候，特別注意，圖中看到了一個未來的時間，2020，那麼就要注意時態的變化啦！

看坡姐怎麼寫的咯！

坡姐範文:

The line gragh compares how many houses of four kinds constructed in an area in UK during the decade from 2010 to 2020.(對首段的改寫，改動詞，主語和趨勢，改時間段）

As is shown in the graph, in 2010, there were the largest number of detached houses （最大值）among all the four categories, with over 2500. It is worth mentioning that （值得提出的是）this data experienced little changes even till 2018 .And it is expected to（對將來的預估，這個地方不能用將來時） remain approximately 2500 in the years to come .（接下來的幾年） While though 2010 witnessed only 2000 semi-detached houses（時間做主語，動詞用witness或see這種高分表達，你值得擁有） , the figure continued to increase to 2500 in 2014 ,which coincided with that（與...相重合） in detached homes in the four next years ,levelling out( 保持不變） at 2500 .This number is projected to （對將來的預估）grow to overtake(超過）that of the first kind ,reaching about 2800 in 2020 .

The other two types of houses----terraced and flats presented similar changes（變化相似）.Specifically,the number of the former started at about 1800 and that of the latter at 1500 respectively .Then both of them revealed a dropping trend before this year ,in spite of slight fluctuation (儘管有一些小的波動）. And they are likely to decline consistently to 1500 and roughly 1000 till 2020 respectively.

In summary, the semi-detached houses are estimated to (對將來的預估）receive more loves from people in UK.

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詳細講解:

下面我們來仔細看看每一條線是如何寫的。

1. 首先是detached-homes,也就是藍線。
   第一句，寫2010年的數據，並提出最大值：in 2010, there were the largest number of detached homes among all the four categories, with over 2500.
   第二句，寫直到2018年的趨勢：It is worth mentioning that this data experienced little changes even till 2018 .
   第三句，寫將來的趨勢：And it is expected to remain approximately 2500 in the years to come .

2. 接下來是semi-tached homes,也就是紅線。
   第一句的前半句寫2010年的數據：While though 2010 witnessed only 2000 semi-detached houses,
   後半句講到2014年的趨勢：the figure continued to increase to 2500 in 2014 ,
   用which引導的定語從句寫特點數據：which coincided with that in detached homes in the four next years ,
   後用伴隨狀語表示後四年趨勢的變化：levelling out at 2500 .
   第二句寫將來的趨勢：This number is ,accordingly ,projected to grow to overtake that of the first kind ,reaching about 2800 in 2020 .
3. 接著是最後兩根線，也就是綠線和紫線。
   第一句是中心句，因為趨勢相類似，所以合在一起說：The other two types of houses----terraced and flats presented similar changes.
   第二句是寫在2010年的數據：Specifically,the number of the former started at about 1800 and that of the latter at 1500 respectively。
   第三句寫到2018年時的趨勢：Then both of them revealed a dropping trend before this year ,in spite of slight fluctuation.
   第四句寫將來的趨勢：And they are likely to decline consistently to 1500 and roughly 1000 till 2020 respectively.
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