雅思4月7日真題大作文16句框架範文示範-社會類觀點類

4/7真題：Some people think the most important thing about being rich is helping other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

大作文四大基本類中agree類，關鍵：

1. 開頭段表明立場

2. 我在16句範文中列出每一步的用途，思維導圖如下：

3. 中間段落idea的拓展有兩種方法:explain和example，其中explain包括三種：

原因（問自己why？），結果（問自己so？），對比（對比另一個選擇或/ 問自己如果不if not？）

4. 劃線部分為可借鑒「詞伙」

2+6+6+2

Many people are convinced that offering help to those in need should be at the top of rich people』s agenda（背景）. However, I would insist that, while the rich should be engaged in assisting others, they still have other equally important undertakings to attend to（觀點）.

The assistance from the wealthy has proved considerably valuable(主題句). Poor countries and people in remote areas have benefited from charitable activities sponsored by successful people worldwide(why?). For example, many famous accomplished businessmen have been committed to improvingeducation in poverty-stricken nations such as Africa(example?). Thanks to donations from them, a growing number of children there are having access to richer educational resources, which leads to higher literacy(so？). Without the help, the gap between the rich and poor would be more salient（對比）. This well justifies the call from the public for contributions from the wealthyto society(summary).

However, what is equally important for these people is to realize personal life purpose(主題句). With hard-earned money, they are entitled to pursue their bigger dreams in life(why?). For instance, some may prefer to travel all over the world once becoming affluent while others may instead opt to be devoted to developing certain technologies that they have strong passion for(example?). They would derive a massive sense of fulfillment from spending money in this way(so？). By contrast,demanding them to fund others with the majority of their wealth would be very unfair（對比）. Embracing what they are enthusiastic about would further help the financially solid realize the value of life(summary).

In conclusion, although I agree that giving back to society is a responsibility of rich people, they should also enjoy the fruit of their labor by realizing more dreams(觀點重述). Successful people are sensible to strike a balance between the two causes. (288)

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