2018年4月14日雅思考試小作文範文~

Task1 of IELTS on April14.2018

題目:

The table below gives us information of 5types of product exported from HongKong in 2009 and 2010.

坡姐讀題:

本次考試是表格題，好久木有出現了，有沒有嚇到大家。其實，表格題應該是圖表題的最簡單的一類。

不管是靜態還是動態的表格題型，圖表題的特點是數據多，數據繁雜，這個時候就需要大家開啟你的耐心和細心，仔細觀察數據，變著花樣地把數據的變化寫出來。

坡姐範文:

The tables illustrate us the value about five different kinds of exported goods from HongKong in the years of 2009 and 2010.(首段的改寫，paraphrase，用你的話，重述一遍）

As shown from the table, 10.3 HK billion dollars ($ HK billion) )of manufacturing equipment was exported in 2009 and this increased a little to $11.7 HK billion in 2010 ,with 12.6% change in total percentage .（增加了一點，with作伴隨狀語。高分表達，你值得擁有） Likewise, this period also saw a growth(由時間做主語，見證了... )in the value of telecommunication ,from $7.9 HK billion to $11.6 HK billion ,which showed almost 50% in the total percentage change. What is worth to mention (值得提出的是）is metal ,since its increasing export more than doubled （超過2倍）(from $2.3 HK billion to $5.1HK billion) ,the largest among all the five .（是5個種類中最大的增長） Meanwhile, the total percentage change reached up to 121.7% .

By contrast , although there was a marginal decline（marginal, 細微的） by $1.3 HK billion to $5.2 HK billion in 2010 in terms of clothing , the overall proportion still slightly(也是細微，但是是副詞） rose by 20%. Surprisingly ,the exported machinery experienced a mere rise of (由事物作主語，也是高分表達)$0.2 HK billion to $4.8 HK billion in 2010, but its total proportion presented a 4% shrinkage.(縮水）

To sum up , the value of specific goods fluctuated obviously (明顯有浮動）in the two years ,the total export value had a clear increase from $32 HK billion in 2009 and $38.4 HK billion ,with 20% change in total .

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