2018年雅思寫作暖心推送第79篇:4月7日雅思小作文真題詳細解析和範文:一個博物館的變化(非常規立體圖形)

4月21日雅思考前寫作預測2班最後一個名額,有興趣的同學抓緊時間報名。想參加4月26日考前預測的同學也要提前佔位置了,還有三個就滿了。

7號的小作文又是比較難寫的模式,雖然地圖題是高危圖形因為已經三個月沒有考了,但是這次的地圖又不是很常規,我們以前的圖形基本都是平面圖,這次出現的圖形卻是立體圖,涉及到樓層的增高,這個對大家是一個挑戰,我看到某雅思app上推送的範文竟然把這個寫成南北,我也是醉了。範文如下:

The diagrams indicate the dramatic development which happened to(地圖題的標準標題改寫模式) the South Wing of Walton Museum during the four years from 2008.

Compared with the museum in 2008, the situation of 2012 experienced a noticeable transformation(第二段第一句話固定句式). To be specific, there was still a path leading to(寫路通向哪裡用) the west part of the museum which connected a special exhibition room and entrance. The original entrance was enlarged and converted into an entrance hall. Close to it, the former reception developed a new affiliated(附屬的) function as a cloakroom with a restaurant located on the newly-built top floor of it and the size of the shop on the first floor remained unchanged.

Turning to the eastern part of the museum, only the reading room on the second floor demonstrated no change, below which, the cloakroom was removed, giving way to(代替的固定表達) a children play area. It is worth mentioning that two new upper storeys were constructed which belonged to the self-service café and exhibition room in sequence(按順序). In addition, the initial stairs disappeared completely, on the location of which, a new life came into being(代替的另一種表達).

Seen from the diagrams, the layout(布局) of the museum underwent an obvious modification, which means more functional zones were added during the given time.

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