英語寫作20+學霸都在用的8組高分詞，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮！

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英語寫作20+學霸都在用的8組高分詞，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮！

在英語作文閱卷過程中，老師會對一些「高級」辭彙尤為偏愛。但是，大多數同學根本不具備單詞升級意識：

一想到「好」，就是「good」；

一想到「壞」，就是「bad」；

一想到「美麗」就是「beautiful」。

當老師一天批閱上千份「內容相同、語言低齡」的作文時，他的痛苦感受可想而知。

因此，你一定要避免這些「低能辭彙」，用高中所學到的一些高級辭彙來取代它們，讓自己的辭彙升級、升級再升級！今天，小天整理了一些能讓閱卷老師眼前一亮的高分詞，助力英語作文20+。

第1組：代替important的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕Education

is very important.

〔高級〕Education

is of
much/vital/great importance.

〔簡單〕The work

he does is very important.

〔高級〕The work

he does is absolutely vital.

〔簡單〕A

balanced diet is very important for us.

〔高級〕A

balanced diet is absolutely essential for everyone.

〔簡單〕Money is

the only thing thats important to him.

〔高級〕Money is

the only thing that matters to him.

〔簡單〕First

impressions are very important.

〔高級〕First

impressions really do count.

〔簡單〕Parents

are important in childrens

learning.

〔高級〕Parents play an

important role/part in childrens learning.

〔簡單〕Childrens education is very important for Chinese parents.

〔高級〕Chinese

parents attach much

importance to childrens education.

〔簡單〕Its very important for parents to be honest with their children.

〔高級〕Its very vital/essential for parents to be

honest with their children.

第2組：代替good的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕He is a

good football player.

〔高級〕He is an amazing football

player.

〔簡單〕This is

a very good place.

〔高級〕This is a fantastic place,

really beautiful.

〔簡單〕The view

from my bedroom window was very good.

〔高級〕The view

from my bedroom window was absolutely breathtaking.

〔簡單〕This is

a very good opportunity to learn about American culture.

〔高級〕This is a unique opportunity

to learn about American culture.

〔簡單〕The

schools

examination results were very good.

〔高級〕The

schools

examination results were very impressive.

〔簡單〕The food

was very good and we had a wonderful night.

〔高級〕The food

was superb and

we had a wonderful night.（superb：傑出的，極好的）

〔簡單〕The

staff are doing a good job.

〔高級〕The

staff are doing a splendid job.（splendid：輝煌的，燦爛的，極好的）

〔簡單〕I cant stand him, but my wife thinks hes very good.

〔高級〕I cant stand him, but my wife thinks hes marvelous.（marvelous：非凡的，不可思議的）

〔簡單〕You look

very good in that dress.

〔高級〕You look absolutely gorgeous in

that dress!

第3組：代替cause/make的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕His

actions could make him lose his job.

〔高級〕His

actions could lead to him
losing his job.（lead to sb

doing sth：導致某人做某事）

〔簡單〕The

accident caused two passengers to die.

〔高級〕The

accident resulted in the

death of two passengers.

〔簡單〕There

are several reasons for the strange phenomenon.

〔高級〕Several

reasons may account for the strange

phenomenon.（account for：對...做出解釋）

〔簡單〕The

floods caused the deaths of over a hundred people.

〔高級〕The

floods were responsible
for the deaths of over a hundred people.

〔簡單〕Daily

shaving can cause a number of skin problems.

〔高級〕Daily

shaving can give rise to a

number of skin problems.（give rise to：引起，導致）

〔簡單〕We are

still dealing with problems caused by your mistake.

〔高級〕We are

still dealing with problems resulting from your mistake.

第4組：代替because of的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕Weve reached our goal because of your great help.

〔高級〕Weve reached our goal, thanks to your great help.

〔簡單〕Because

the money isnt

enough, the project will not continue next year.

〔高級〕Owing to a lack of funds, the project will not continue next year.

〔簡單〕Because

of the pilots strike, all flights have had to be cancelled.

〔高級〕As a

result of the pilots strike, all flights have had to be cancelled.

〔簡單〕The

fishes in the river have died because of water pollution.

〔高級〕The

fishes in the river have died as a consequence of water

pollution.

〔簡單〕The

restaurants

success was mainly because of its new manager.

〔高級〕The

restaurants

success was due largely to its new manager.

第5組：代替very的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕Self-confidence

is very important to our success.

〔高級〕Self-confidence

is absolutely vital

to our success.

〔簡單〕Earthquakes

are very difficult to predict.

〔高級〕Earthquakes

are extremely difficult to predict.

〔簡單〕His

mother is a very successful politician.

〔高級〕His

mother is a highly successful politician.

〔簡單〕His

attitude very important to its success.

〔高級〕Its

success will depend to a large extent on

his attitude.（to a large extent：在很大程度上）

〔簡單〕She

looks very beautiful tonight.

〔高級〕She

looks extraordinarily beautiful

tonight.（extraordinarily：非常，格外的）

〔簡單〕Conditions

have improved a lot over the past few years

〔高級〕Conditions

have improved considerably over the past few

years.（considerably：相當，非常）

〔簡單〕Raising

money for the homeless has been very difficult.

〔高級〕Raising

money for the homeless has been incredibly difficult.（incredibly：難以置信地，很）

第6組：表達「對…有好處」的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕The

visit to European universities will be good for us.

〔高級〕We will benefit

greatly from the visit to European universities.

〔簡單〕We

should work together to help the whole community.

〔高級〕We

should worker together to benefit the whole community.

〔簡單〕A bit

more exercise would be good for you.

〔高級〕A bit

more exercise would do you good.

〔簡單〕Its useless to tell him --- he wont listen.

〔高級〕Its no

good telling him --- he wont listen.

〔簡單〕The

summer course can make students oral English become better.

〔高級〕The

summer course can improve students oral English.

第7組：表達「對…壞處」的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕Modern

farming is very bad for the countryside.

〔高級〕Modern

farming have done
much harm to the countryside.

〔簡單〕These

chemicals is very bad for the environment.

〔高級〕These

chemicals have caused
serious damage to the environment.

〔簡單〕Smoking

can be very bad for your health.

〔高級〕Smoking

can severely
damage your health.

〔簡單〕The fire

was very bad for the school.

〔高級〕The

school was
completely destroyed in the fire.

〔簡單〕Alcohol

and drugs were very bad for his career.

〔高級〕Alcohol

and drugs almost ruined his career.

〔簡單〕I want

you to have fun.

〔高級〕I dont want to spoil your fun.（spoil：溺愛，毀掉）

第8組：表示「大小多少」的高級辭彙

〔簡單〕My new

job will be a big challenge.

〔高級〕My new

job will be a tremendous challenge.（巨大的）

〔簡單〕More and

more Americans are curious about Chinese culture.

〔高級〕An

increasing number of Americans are

curious about Chinese culture.

〔簡單〕The

shortage of teachers is a big problem.

〔高級〕The

shortage of teachers poses a major problem.（poses a major problem：構成重大問題）

〔簡單〕We have

made some small changes to the program.

〔高級〕We

have made some minor changes to the

program.（minor：較小的）

〔簡單〕Most of

the students are short-sighted.

〔高級〕The

majority of the students are

short-sighted.

〔簡單〕The

policy benefits only a small group of people in the country.

〔高級〕The

policy benefits only a small minority of the countrys population.

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