【包子姐kitty】狂提分之寫作常見語法錯誤

04-29

在IELTS備考的過程中，有很多同學自己練習了大量SWT和Essay，卻越寫越沒譜了。原因在於，無論你自己練習了多少篇，沒有專業老師的批改，依然不知道具體的語法點到底是對是錯，於是你就越來越糾結，甚至陷入錯誤的死循環。而在IELTS考試的寫作部分，語法的重要性比內容大很多，所以大家一定要重視。

那麼，在IELTS寫作中，有哪些錯誤是同學們比較容易范的呢？

錯誤一一個句子中有多個動詞

錯例：Students receive job training can become competitive in the labour market;

這個句子中出現了兩個動詞, receive 和 can become. 注意一個句子中應該有且只有一個謂語動詞。

改正：應該添加一個從句結構。

Students who receive job training can become competitive in the labour market;

Students can become competitive in the labour market if they receive skills training.

錯誤二 There be 句型中謂語沒有隨其後名詞改變

錯例：There is a number of countries which know that they will soon be underwater if global warming is permitted to continue.

這裡There be 結構中的主語是countries, 所以謂語動詞要用are.

改正：There are a number of countries which know that they will soon be underwater if global warming is permitted to continue.

錯誤三主謂不一致

有時在SWT中大家要會寫一些比較複雜的句式，例如插入成分或同謂語成分。在寫作的過程當中，每每遇到以上幾種情況的時候，回眸重新找到句子的主語是最重要的。

例如：Thomas Edison, one of the most distinguished scientists, is a brilliant inventor.這裡在寫完第二個逗號的時候，就應該回過頭來看看主語Thomas Edison是單數的第三人稱，而不能被插入成分中的scientists所蒙蔽。所以這裡的謂語要用is 而不是are.

錯例：Cardiopathy, coupled with poor diet, lead to severe diabetes.

這就話中主語為cardiopathy, 謂語應該為單三形式。

改正：Cardiopathy, coupled with poor diet, leads to severe diabetes.

錯誤四不及物動詞和系動詞寫了被動語態

happen, appear, disappear, rise, emerge, occur, take place 這些詞都沒有被動語態

錯例：The accident was similar to the one that was happened last year;

改正：The accident was similar to the one that happened last year.

錯誤五丟失冠詞

錯例：A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

改正：A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

錯誤六詞性混淆

錯例：A large number of people hold the believe that students social activities should be the first priority.

改正：A large number of people hold the belief that students social activities should be the first priority.

這個例子中believe是動詞，belief才是名詞形式。雖然發音相近，但是用法卻完全不同。

練習——找出這段的四處語法錯誤

Armed police, who has been brought into NSW schools to reduce crime rates and educated students, are expect to build positive relationships with schoolchildren and imparted knowledge to them about shoplifting, offensive behavior, graffiti, drugs and alcohol in schools in Sydney, while parents are afraid of dangers that were happened in communities last year.

首先找到這句話的主幹部分Armed police are expected to build positive relationships with schoolchildren and impart knowledge to them about...

錯誤一：Armed police, who has been brought into NSW schools...

Armed police為可數名詞，因為是集合名詞本身表示複數，單複數同行，所以不用加s.這句話應該改為Armed police, who have been brought into NSW schools...

錯誤二：who has been brought into NSW schools to reduce crime rates and educated students

這裡應該是一個並列結構，所以educate應該與reduce是一致的，所以應該改成to reduce crime rates and educate students (to reduce crime and to educate student).

錯誤三：Armed police are expect to build positive relationships...

這個部分的主語是 Armed police, 所以謂語動詞應該為被動，表示被期待。所以應該改為 Armed police are expected to build positive relationships...

錯誤四：不及物動詞和系動詞沒有被動語態：happen, appear, disappear, rise, emerge, occur, take place 這些詞都沒有被動語態, 所以while parents are afraid of dangers that were happened in communities last year. 應改成while parents are afraid of dangers that happened in communities last year.

正確版答案

Armed police, who have been brought into NSW schools to reduce crime rates and educate students, are expected to build positive relationships with schoolchildren and impart knowledge to them about shoplifting, offensive behavior, graffiti, drugs and alcohol in schools in Sydney, while parents are afraid of dangers that happened in communities last year.