SAT寫作套路：結尾段

04-27

作文寫到結尾了得善始善終，結尾段最常見的處理方法就是開頭段的同義句改寫，依舊按照得分點來寫。

結尾段得分點：

行文技巧：總結討論的行文技巧，可以同義改寫開頭句

總結主旨：重申文章主旨（刪去S主題句和O場合句，只保留W作者句和P目的句），注意同義句轉化開頭文字

我將用上文滿分開頭示範如何在同義句改寫開頭段。改寫過程大體分成以下兩個步驟：

Peter Goodman, in his 「Foreign News at a Crisis Point,」 describes the dramatic declining of foreign news coverage in America. Goodman』s purpose is to persuade his audience that American news organizations should increase the amount of professional foreign reporting. He effectively conveys this argument by using example, cause-and-effect reasoning, and specific diction.

第一步：更換同義詞/改變詞性

同義改寫最基本的方法就是更換同義詞或者同義表達，如果沒有可以替換的同義詞可以考慮改變詞性，比如動詞和名詞之間互換。

persuade可以替換成convince
increase 可以替換成 enlarge
reporting 可以替換成news coverage
using可以替換成the usage of

第二步：改變句型

改變句型最常用的方法就是主動和被動句之間相互轉化，熟練的同學也可以嘗試合併句子改寫從句。

（1）…American news organizations should increase the amount of professional foreign reporting. 可以改成：

…the amount of professional foreign reporting in America should be increased.

(2) 將目的句和技巧句合併，並作適當微調

Through using example, cause-and-effect reasoning, and specific diction, Peter Goodman builds an argument to persuade his audience that the amount of professional foreign reporting in American should be increased.

第三步：合併修改結果，並作適當微調

In 「Foreign News at a Crisis Point,」 through the usage of example, cause-and-effect reasoning, and specific diction, Peter Goodman builds an argument to convince his audience that the amount of foreign news coverage should be enlarged.

當大家熟練掌握結尾段得分點後可根據個人興趣適當增補刪減和微調，字數大概控制在30字到50字之間。時間控制在3分鐘內。

示範如下：

高分結尾示範一

Goodman』s use of statistic and facts, cause-and-effect reasoning, and specific diction establishes his argument of the need for more foreign reporters as well as serve to persuade his audience of the urgent need to do so.

得分點分析：

Goodman』s use of statistic and facts, cause-and-effect reasoning, and specific diction (行文技巧) establishes his argument of the need for more foreign reporters as well as serve to persuade his audience of the urgent need to do so.（總結主旨）

高分結尾示範二

It is through many rhetorical devices that Summers sells his argument. Powerful diction, qualification, ethos, pathos and logos all contribute to an exceptionally well-written argument. Once one reads the piece, they』ll be nodding along in accordance with Summers and agree that we need more professional foreign news reporting.

得分點分析：

It is through many rhetorical devices that Summers sells his argument. Powerful diction, qualification, ethos, pathos and logos all contribute to an exceptionally well-written argument. (行文技巧) Once one reads the piece, they』ll be nodding along in accordance with Summers and agree that we need more professional foreign news reporting. （總結主旨）

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