【SAT寫作批改】《Cant Find Skilled Workers? Start an Apprentice Program》

學生最大的問題在於，對於讀者作用分析並沒有真正切換到讀者的角度深入分析，仍然集中在對於文本的概括，第三自然段的statistics分析可以參考以下文字思考如何做到深入思考。

From these statistics, the authors sense of worry is apparent because the US is falling behind from the other countries. These actually numbers will cause the readers who previously thought of apprentice programs as useless to rethink their perspective ,and fortify the perspective of people that think the programs are good. This paragraph helps the author explain his other argument by placing down basic beliefs about the topic that will help explain the proceeding paragraphs. The statistics itself accurately and directly support the objectiveness of his argument.

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