一個得到了還不錯回應的套辭信

沒想到從申請下來到現在一直就被我荒廢了。

前一陣子把最近在寫的並不斷修改 ing 的套辭信放在了這裡。

還找了一個我的美國朋友幫我修改了一下。

本來關注我的人就不多 所以也沒什麼好怕的 哈哈 希望萬一有人能看到來幫我指點一二。

結果我今天得到了一個還不錯的回應。

文中的「XXX」都是教授或者我自己的具體信息 不便放出啦。

Dear Prof. XXX,

My name is Abby XXX, currently a Product Manager from Beijing, China.

I am fascinated by your HCI research areas of XXX, XXX and XXX.

I am applying to the M.Sc. program at XXX for Spring / Fall 2018 and wondering if you could consider me as your student.

In the three years since obtaining a B.E. in Software Engineering from a C9-League university in China, I』ve challenged myself in senior roles as a Project Manager at some of the top Internet Companies such as Baidu, Inc.

My areas of focus are:

1. Leveraging user research in interaction design of apps and smart devices

2. Designing functions and logic of complicated systems.

3. Working closely with UI designers / developers / QA / marketers … almost every role in large matrixed organizations and startups.

Therefore, your papers about conversational programmers hit close to home as my programming background allowed me to improve project efficiency.

While working on walking navigation, carpool, smart watches and drone projects, my passion for XXX has been my constant companion. Under your tutelage, I would be honored to explore how to provide software help to disabled people or the elders; or how HCI could be different in touch-screen games or smart devices; or deep insight about methods to design interactive systems or investigate user needs.

My CV is attached.

Thank you for your time. I can think of no better way to make my career forward than if you would consider being my supervisor.

Best Regards,

Abby Yangzi Deng

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