練習以下句子，有助於減少中式英語思維

中英轉換常見的問題有： 1 濫用make, let 2 句子充當句子的主語 3 句子充當句子的賓語，等等。大家可以做一下這些翻譯，看一下中英句子結構的差異。

01

學習時間很長令很多學生沒有機會去發展自己的興趣愛好。

學生的句子：

Long time learning makes many students not to develop their own interests and habits.

錯誤的原因：

make somebody do，不能說not to do

提升的句子：

If students study long hours every day, they will not have opportunities to develop their interests/ pursue their hobbies. (√)

02

人們度假的話可以導致他們變懶，很難適應工作。

學生的句子：

people take vacations can make them get lazy and find it hard to adapt to work.

錯誤的原因：

people take vacations是個句子，不能充當另外一個句子的主語。

提升的句子：

If people take a vacation, they are likely to become lazy and find it difficult to adapt to work.(√)

03

使用清潔能源去發電能夠導致我們減少溫室氣體的排放。

學生的句子：

Use clean energy to make electricity can enable us to reduce emissions of green gases.

錯誤的原因：

use是個動詞，不能充當主語。

提升的句子：

If clean energy is used to generate electricity, we can reduce greenhouse gas emissions.(√)

04

太空旅遊的發展對於國家有資金去發展太空行業是重要的。

學生的句子：

The development of space travel is beneficial to expand the space industry for countries with funds.

錯誤的原因：

這個to是介詞，後面不能加do

提升的句子：

If space tourism flourishes, a country will have money to develop the space industry. (√)

The development of space tourism is important to the space industry because the country has money. (√)

The development of space tourism provides a country with money to develop the space industry. (√)

05

高等教育對於希望在高科技行業從業的人特別重要。

學生的句子：

Tertiary education is extremely vital for those people to want to work in high-technology industries.

錯誤的原因：

這個to是介詞，後面不能加do

提升的句子：

Higher education is important to people who intend to find work in the technology sector. (√)

Higher education is important to everybody, especially those people who intend to find work in the technology sector. (√)

06

人們的收入越來越高了，因此，他們可以買的起名牌。

學生的句子：

People』s salary is higher and higher and can buy famous brands.

錯誤的原因：

salary不能充當句子的主語。

提升的句子：

As people』s income increases, they are able to afford famous brands. (√)

People are able to earn higher income today; therefore, they are able to afford famous brands. (√)

People who have high income can afford famous brands. (√)

07

隨著技術的發展，許多人發現每天處理許多事情很容易。

學生的句子：

As the development of technology, many people have found it easy to deal with many tasks every day.

錯誤的原因：

as不是介詞

提升的句子：

With the development of technology, many people have found it easy to deal with many tasks every day.(√)

As technology has advanced quickly, many people have found it easy to deal with many tasks every day.(√)

08

人們存錢可以享受快樂的退休生活。

學生的句子：

People save money are able to enjoy a happy retirement.

錯誤的原因：

句子不能充當句子的主語。

提升的句子：

If People save money, they will be able to enjoy a happy retirement.(√)

或者 People who save money will be able to enjoy a happy retirement.(√)

09

存錢使人們退休時不依賴養老金。

學生的句子：

Saving money makes people don』t rely on the pension when they retire.

錯誤的原因：

make後面不能加句子。

提升的句子：

If people save money, they will not rely on the pension when they retire.(√)

10

長時間的工作會提高人們的技能，增加工作經驗。

學生的句子：

Working long hours results in people improve skills and increase experience.

錯誤的原因：

result in後面不能加句子。

提升的句子：

If people work long hours, they can improve skills and increase experience.(√)

11

我們需要關注建築的外觀。這樣可以有助於城市去吸引遊客。

學生的句子：

It is important to pay attention to the appearance of buildings. This is helpful for a city to attract tourists.

錯誤的原因：

沒有this is helpful for somebody to do something的說法。

提升的句子：

It is important to pay attention to the appearance of buildings. Beautiful architecture helps a city attract tourists.(√)

12

長時間工作對於人們提高技能，發現工作的問題是重要的。

學生的句子：

working for a long time is important for people to improve skills and discover problems at work.

錯誤的原因：

如果is important to的主語是一個具體的事物，這個時候to是介詞，後面加名詞。

提升的句子：

Working for a long time helps people to improve skills and discover problems at work.

或者 If people work for a long time, they can improve skills and discover problems at work.

或者it is important to work for a long time because people can improve skills and discover problems at work.

或者By working for a long time, people can improve skills and discover problems at work.

13

據說努力工作對發展事業很重要。

學生的句子：

It is said that working hard is important to develop one』s career.

錯誤的原因：

如果is important to的主語是一個具體的事物，這個時候to是介詞，後面加名詞。

提升的句子：

It is said that working hard is important to one』s career. (√)

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