劍橋雅思6 Test2 小作文解析

The table belowgives information about changesin modes of travel in Englandbetween 1985 and 2000.

(miles per person per year)

範文：

The table showschanges of popularity of different forms of travel in England in 1985 and 2000.Individuals in 1985 traveled on average 4740 miles per year and this figureincreased to 6475 in 2000.

Some modes of transport were used lessfrequently in 2000 than in 1985. Most strikingly, onaverage, each person traveled 429 miles in 1985 in local buses but only 274 in 2000. There were less dramatic decreasesin the popularity of walking andcycling, from 255 to 237 milesand 51 to 41 respectively.

On the other hand, the English traveledmore using other forms of transport between 1985 and 2000. Not only did theydrive cars much more often (from 3199miles to 4806 per person each year), but also they traveled in taxis much more frequently (from 13 miles to42). Besides, the numbers of miles they traveled on long-distance buses and trainsrose by similar amounts, from 54 to 124 and 289 to 366 respectively.

In sum, althoughthe distance individuals traveled using various modes of transport changed,they traveled more than they had in total. In both years, the most frequentmode of travel was by car.

文章結構是難點！！！

1）不少考鴨想按列寫，並且把題目當成靜態圖。這樣，會丟失大量的features，分數一定低。

2）不少考鴨想按列寫，但是把題目當成動態圖。可以。

3）按行寫（同劍橋雅思10 Test 2考官範文），每一行的2個數字一起寫，並帶上趨勢。

仍然要寫2個主體段，所以你會考慮將哪些modes分成一組，將哪些分成另一組呢？

①按照趨勢分組：增加的和減少的（本文採用的方式）

②按照數值大小（即方式的受歡迎程度，因為移動距離長的方式就是受歡迎的方式）分組：上百的和沒上百的。

即使考慮了用①的方式分組，寫作時仍然面臨下一個問題：

一組裡面要寫幾個modes，應該用什麼順序將它們排序？

差值的大小！

（建議保存原圖後查看下圖）

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寫句子是難點！！！

bicycle,51 miles per person per year, 1985

如何連接成一個句子？

1） 人們移動了51英里，在自行車上。

On average,each person in England traveled 51 miles on bikes in1985.

2）人們在自行車上移動的距離是51英里。

Milestraveledonbikes in 1985 was 51 perperson per year.

或者 Distancetraveled onbikes was 51miles in 1985 perperson per year.

既然要按行寫，一句話就應該帶有2個數字加趨勢，如

1985年平均每人騎自行車的距離高於2000年，從51英里降至41英里。

這個句子怎麼寫？

1) On average,each person in England traveled on bikes 51 miles in 1985 but only 41 in 2000.

2) Themode ofbicycle showeda decreasein popularity,from 51 in1985 to 41miles perperson in 2000.

3) Peoplerodebicycles more often in 1985 than in 2000 (from 51 to 41 miles per person per year).

4) Bikeswere used more frequently in 1985 than in 2000 (from 51 to 41 miles per person per year).

5) Therewas a decrease in the use of bicycles (from 51 in 1985 to 41 miles per person per yearin 2000)

範文解析（建議保存圖片後查看）：

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