2018年暖心推送第33篇：醫療應該免費嗎（政府類）

02-22

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Some people think health care should be made free for all people, while others believe people should pay for health care by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Should health care be made free for all people, or should people pay health care all by themselves? This is a question that plagues（困擾） many governments nowadays in the world.這種簡單簡短的開頭也不錯的啊，乾淨利落

On the one hand, many people hold the opinion that(discuss類文章的第二段起頭形式) health care should be free. They argue that if this target is achieved, people will not have to worry about expensive expenses. This is of paramount importance（具有至關重要的作用） for those economically underprivileged(經濟貧困的人). With free health care, they can go to hospital whenever they find there is anything wrong with their health without worrying about money. This will, of course, enhance their sense of well-being（提高幸福感） and the entire society will become much more harmonious. My uncle is a good example. He developed T.B.（肺結核） when he was at his 50s. he would be dead now but for(要不是，前面用虛擬語氣) the free health care policy practiced in the region where he lives. Now he and his family are very much grateful to the local government and would do everything for it.

On the other hand, there are many others who think people should pay for health care by themselves. Free health care, in their opinion, will put a huge amount of financial burden onto the government budget, which should go to more important sectors such as education and environmental protection. In addition, if people pay for their own health care, they will have more momentum(動力) to go in for physical exercise, and this is of course a better way to protect their health than going to hospital.

From my own perspective(這種文章的結尾起頭句), if people have to pay for their own health care, many problems may arise. The most serious one is that those poor people cannot enjoy health care because they are not able to afford the health care costs. If we take that factor into account（考慮到）, we may safely conclude that whether health care should be made free or not is dependent upon the people who receive it. If a man is rich enough to pay for his health care, he should be made to pay; but if a man is not rich enough, he should also receive medical care without having to pay. Only by doing so（主句要倒裝結構）, can all people, rich and poor, embrace the same health care services and live in a more just , peaceful and harmonious world.