2018年暖心推送第32篇：文化傳統是否應該開放給旅遊去掙錢（文化類）

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Some think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aiming at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save such traditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

As tourism is developing by leaps and bounds（日新月異地）, we can witness many cultural traditions open to tourists. Some people are deeply worried, thinking this money-making act（做法=practice） will destroy these cultural heritages, but others hold the belief that(認為) in contemporary world, putting such traditions into tourism market is the only way to save them.

本段論述過度商業開發的壞處，遊客有不同品味，文化表演也必須有相應的改變來吸引遊客。雖然為本土的傳統增添特別的風韻，但同時也常會破壞這些傳統

On the one hand, over-exploitation(過度開發) of cultural traditions for money may really pose a serious threat to（構成嚴重的威脅） their protection. As tourists come from different parts of the world, they have various kinds of tastes. Accordingly, they may ask the cultural traditions to be adapted to their tastes. For instance, a Chinese visitor to Stratford-on-Avon may expect Shakespeares plays to be performed in a style similar to Chinese plays so that he can understand them. By the same token(同理，類似=by the same logic), a Chinese local cultural performance has also to be altered in order to cater to the need(迎合需求) of American tourists in China. These alteration may add some special flavor to the original traditions undoubtedly, but more often than not（經常=often/frequently）, they will ruin these traditions.

本段論述文化傳統商業化的好處：其利潤可用於其延續和發展

On the other hand, however, merchandising（商業化） the cultural traditions does a great job in（有助於） saving them to some extent. It is universally acknowledged that(總所周知) preserving those traditions calls for（需要） heavy government budget, which is not always available. As far as I know, except for the few traditions which appear on the list of " must preserve", many traditions are disappearing for financial reasons. By opening them to tourists, they can generate（產生） profits, which, in turn（反過來）, can be used for their protection and development.

這種discuss文章，結尾段應該多寫點，把自己的觀點表達清楚，還是贊成商業化是更好的選擇：開發會帶來新的靈感和視角，收益也可用於維護傳統，減輕政府的財政負擔

While as money-making machines, some traditional cultures may suffer, I firmly believe that opening them to tourists is a better choice. Firstly, cultural traditions, however, ancient and classical, must change with time. Tourists from the world may bring new perspectives and inspirations, and thus new life to these traditions. At the same time, opening-to-tourism can also bring about profits which can effectively relieve government of the financial burden.