2018年暖心推送第27篇:2018年2月3日雅思大作文真題詳細解析和範文:保護老建築還是建新房子和公路更重要
有興趣參加2月10日雅思考前預測班和小作文6.5-7分衝刺精講班的同學抓緊時間聯繫我,周一晚上開始準時開課。預測班還有最後一個名額,預報從速。
二月份第二次考試的大作文依然是舊題,是2013年7月27日的原題重現,同時和2017年12月2日的題目也有相似之處,都是關於老建築是否該保留還是拆除的問題。不過今天的考試題目和去年的相比,涉及一個小小的比較:到底老建築重要還是新的住房和道路更重要。範文如下:
題目:The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During the process of/with sweeping trend of(隨著城市化的快速發展) urbanization, governments in different countries show different attitudes towards their historic buildings. In some countries, a large number of old fashioned houses have been demolished(拆除) to give way to modern housing and road construction. I will discuss this tendency in the following essay and present my opinion(不提觀點引出下文的套句).
贊成的原因:有歷史價值的老建築是文化的精華(cultural essence),值得政府投資區保護,這樣可以讓公民可以把優秀的傳統代代相傳
On the one hand, the importance of restoring old buildings, especially historic ones which represent local unique history and culture, can never be doubted. Although it is true that the renovation of old buildings costs numerous government funds, it is worthy of such expenditure. This is largely because keeping those buildings as they were hundreds of years ago allows local residents to understand their history and culture better and it would also encourage them to inherit traditions from generation to generation(代代相傳). Therefore, it is worthwhile for the government to(值得做) support such an investment.
新房子和公路也值得政府投資,因為新房子在空間和材料的利用上更科學,可以容納更多的人口,公路的發展可以促進貿易的繁榮和物流行業的昌盛
On the other hand, a higher proportion of government budget should be allocated to new houses and road development. For one thing, the new modern buildings are commonly more glamorous and functional(美觀和多功能) than old ones. Modern architectural techniques give modern buildings advantages in terms of spatial and material use(空間和材料的使用) for accommodating an increasing number of citizens(容納更多的人口) in the crowded metropolis(擁擠的大都市). For another, substantial new roads are also highly needed due to the fast progress of trade and business. With the construction of well-designed road and relevant facilities, the logistics industry(物流業) would be remarkably boosted.
雙邊觀點,總結中間的理由就可以了
Based on the analysis above(綜上所述), I tend to believe that the conservation of old buildings may cost a lot but such a practice gets rewards(有回報) in terms of cultural transmission(文化傳承). Besides, new housing and road development are as important as restoring historic buildings, and therefore local governments should ensure their sufficient fiscal expenditure(財政花費).
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