【2018.2.3雅思寫作】是否重修老建築

最近一次2月3日的雅思考試，又考到了之前的舊題，我們先來看一下題目

先給大家分享一些中文思路~

題目：

The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments expenditures.This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

主體一：先論證老建築被先進設施取代的合理性

中心句：政府的首要任務就是創造更好更舒適安全的社會，這意味著那些老建築會被新設施所替代

好處1：能提高居民的生活條件

好處2：也降低了因老式建築而造成的火災風險或財產破壞。

舉例：像照明和衛生系統

小結：政府在新房子和道路上花錢是有必要的。

主體二：

中心句：老建築阻礙城市發展，而建築可以刺激經濟增長。

原因1：一方面恢復會花費很多錢但產出少

原因2：另一方面多功能建築才能吸引投資者和消費者來推動經濟繁榮。

主體三：論證恢復一部分老式建築的合理性

中心句：然而，這並不意味著所有的老建築都應該被清除而不考慮其經濟、社會和歷史重要性。

舉例：英國博物館、紫禁城

好處1：有利於提高當地人的歸屬感

好處2：有利於刺激當地旅遊業發展

延伸結果：老建築也會被很好的保護和推動

2018.2.3 範文

Nowadays, due to the fast-growing econmoy,many old buildings especially those in the inner city areas have been demolished and reconstructed into high-rises and shopping centres. But this has aroused much cotroversy on whether governments should allocate their funds on preserving traditional buildings or contructing new structures. From my perspective, most old buildings should be replaced unless they are of great historical or commercial values.

One convincing argument is that the top priority for government is to create a better,safer and more comfortable community for its citizens and it means that those old buildings should be replaced by those with advanced facilities like better lighting and sanitation systems. This change could not only improve residents』 living conditions but also reduce the risks of fire accidents or property damages caused by the old fashioned buildings. So, it is necessary to spend government』s budget in new housing and road projects.

Furthermore, those old fashioned buildings inevitably hinder the urban development but the newly desgined structures could largely stimulate the economic growth instead. This is manily because the reatoration usually costs too much but yieds little improvement on one hand, but on the other hand only those multifunctional buildings could attract more investors and consumers so as to promote the regional prosperity.

However, it does not mean that all the old buildings should be cleared without the consideration of their historic, economic and social significance. In fact, many traditional buildings like British Museum and the Forbidden City are important parts of cultural heritage and could help enhance local citizens』 sense of belonging and stimulate the development of local tourism. Therefore, those aged structures should be well preserved and actively promoted.

In conclusion, most old buildings particularly those hampering the urban development should be immediately demolished and reconstructed into new houses or road because it brings economic benefits to government and higher life quality to peope, but at the same time, buildings of great historic or aesthetic values should be maintained and conserved.

附：

這次的考題又與我們工作室的寫作提綱完美匹配了，提前準備過的寶寶看到題目肯定樂開花了。效果如何用實力說話！

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