經典寫作主體段展開思路分析以及模板示範

02-08

獨立寫作對於主體段展開部分的最重要的要求就是要有邏輯性。這也是很多同學做的不好的地方。究其原因就是同學們平時沒有總結出比較通用的展開的結構並且把這種結構落實到紙上，形成具體的模板。於是到了考試的時候時間一緊張就只能瞎寫，自然就沒有邏輯，或者是寫的字數很少，或者寫了很多但是不知道寫的是啥。可見掌握套路是多麼的重要。

範文學習

Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.

立場：不同意

理由：做作業的時候干別的很難集中精力，必定會影響效率

段落示範

[1] Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. [2] This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. [3] Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. [4] A good case in point is my own experience. [5] When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. [6] If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.

[1] 主題句：It is + adj. + for sb. to do A.
[2] 正面說理：This is because….
[3] 反面說理：Conversely….
[4] 引出例子：A good case in point is X』s experience.
[5-6] 闡述例子： Content of the example

模板總結

It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. This is because A 對於 X 的重要性或者好處。Conversely, 如果不做 A 對於 X 的壞處。A good case in point is Eg1』s experience. 2-3 句闡述例子。The story of Eg1 perfectly illustrates the importance of A.

這裡把 impossible 變成了 important or beneficial 因為大部分題目我們都是支持的。既然支持，原因自然是 A 很好或者 A 很重要，自然這兩個詞就變得非常通用。最後又加了一個對於例子的總結，我們需要做的就是寫清楚 A 對於 X 的好處是啥，不做 A 的壞處是啥，以及補充例子的具體內容。當然了，這只是一個非常理想的情況，如果由於某些原因不能保證正反說理和例子同時存在，可以酌情去掉。比如沒有例子可以只有正反說理，只不過各說 2-3 句即可。類似的，如果沒有反面說理，可以例子或者正面的說理多說一句。極端情況下，主題句和說理都不會寫，那直接上例子唄。

模板示範-1

Agree or disagree, it is better for children to choose the jobs of their parents.

It is important for us to choose a job that suits our interests in order to distinguish ourselves in a particular field. This is because not only could we have much higher work efficiency by devoting ourselves to a job that interests us，but also we are more likely to come up with innovative ideas. Conversely, following in the footsteps of our parents without thinking of what fascinates us is likely to lead us to nothing but mediocre life.A good case in point is Kobe, a shooting guard who plays for the Los Angeles Lakers of the National Basketball Association. He is one of the most influential basketball players in the history of NBA, not solely for his success in leading the Lakers to three consecutive NBA championships, but for his courage to choose a career that he is obsessed with. The story of Kobe perfectly illustrates the importance of personal interest in one』s career development.

重點句式

Not only could we …, but also we are more likely to ….
…., not solely for A, but for B.

重點表達

devote A to B
suit one』s interest | interest sb | fascinate sb | be obsessed with
come up with
without thinking of
following in the footstep of sb

模板替換

主題句

No one would deny the fact that the importance of A to X should never be overlooked.
The fact that A is of vital importance to X is hardly a surprise.
There is no denying that A is conducive to X or A is closely bound up with X.
On no account should we underestimate the importance of A to X.
By no means are we supposed to close our eyes to the importance of A to X.
It is A that plays an essential part in X.
What we have to admit is that A is a major contributor to X.

正面說理

因

One of the most obvious reasons of this point is that ….
What may explain this point is that ….
The reason is that ….
Of the various reasons attempting to account for this point, the most likely one is that ….
It is generally believed that X results from A.

果

That is the reason why ….
…., as a result of which ….
…., which may explain why ….

反面說理

On the contrary | In contrast | Conversely | On the other hand

引出例子

To illustrate, we may refer to the example of A.
A is a good demonstration of this point.
For relevant examples, we just need to turn to A.
There is no better illustration of this point than the example of A.
There are myriads of examples in our lives that can be used here to substantiate this point, one of which is XXX.
If anyone needs convincing that…, here is the proof.
If anyone looks for further evidence that …, they should look at ….
Those seeking more conviction that … can now turn to ….
Examples of this point abounds in our lives, one of which is ….
… can be cited here as an example of this point.

總結例子

The story of Eg. perfectly illustrates the importance of A to X.
It can be seen from the story of Eg. that A is an indispensable ingredient of X.
Without A, Eg. could have never done X.
Needless to say, Eg』s story indicates that X is largely a result of A.
Had Eg. not done A, Eg. would have never done X.