IELTS 寫作Task2（2）：政府財政支出：藝術OR其他領域

Some people think any government money spent in supporting the artists such as painters,

musicians and poets should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【20170909】

首段：背景句+Topic 轉述+個人觀點（3 sentences）

Every year,governments across the world spend large amount of money on supporting artists.Some consider it unjustifiable for governments to fund artists and this money

should be allocated to more important sectors. I agree with this view.

主體段落1：

觀點句+ 讓步句+例子+解釋+駁斥句+結論句（6 sentences）

One reason is that stopping funding artists only has a limited impact on a society. It is true that artists, such as painters, musicians, and poets play an important part in carrying forward a nation』s culture. For example, many musicians performtraditional music in public places in order to spread their culture. If governments stop providing financial support to them, they may not have the time to continue their work because they lack the money to

support their life. However, without government support, they can still work as artists, for they can earn money by selling their art works or raising funds from the public. Therefore, government funding is not a must.

主體段落2：

觀點句+例子X2+推論句X2+結論句（6 sentences）

Another reason is that governments face more urgent challenges that require more investment. In many countries, especially those poor ones, an increasing number of citizens could not afford a college education because tuitions are rising rapidly. Poor healthcare is also a challenge confronting many countries. These are serious problems that can threaten a country』s development and stability, and they must be properly handled. To solve these problems, it is necessary to invest more money on such sectors. As they are more important and urgent than art, cutting back funding on art and allocating the money to these sectors is viable.

尾段：總結，轉述首段內容（1 sentences）

In conclusion, since it is not a must to provide artists with financial support, the money can be better spent by investing in more important things such education and healthcare.

如果喜歡，請記得點贊喲^_^

推薦閱讀：