12月10日托福寫作考後分析

獨立寫作

Agree or disagree: it is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are young than when you are old?

題型：兩元素比較類

思路：一邊倒

一邊倒

跟旅遊相關的話題，開闊眼界、豐富知識這個理由是可以想到的；同時，緩解壓力呀、交朋友啊也都是大家比較熟悉的。所以只要平時備考的時候看了相關的段子的同學今天考得必然比較爽。基本就是默寫段子。同時大家要注意年輕和老年的比較，在每一個主體段套完段子之後，一定要比較一下這兩類人，寫清楚為啥考慮到這一點年輕人應該旅遊而老年人就不應該。

分類討論

本題其實可以從經濟條件的角度來討論，如果有錢的話，當然年輕的時候旅遊，既可以增加見識、還可以擴大社交圈子、還能積累社會經驗，然而如果經濟條件不是很好，年輕的時候還是得以賺錢為主，自然就得老年的時候去旅遊。這樣可以豐富自己的晚年生活，還能減少年輕的時候的生活壓力。

壓力的段子 [記憶複寫第6篇]

It is high time that government should arouse people』s awareness of the importance of physical soundness. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-health state. Given that it is governments『 responsibilities to improve citizens』 health condition—governments should increase access to public exercise equipment in the neighborhood and raise people』s awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly through mass media.

交友的段子[記憶複寫第4篇]

In addition, student organizations and clubs are the places where we can make great friends, which spices up the tedious campus life. A certain type of student organization or club is like a group or circle that appeals to people with similar hobbies or interests, and that is the reason why one can find his or her congenial friends in the club more often than not. For example, people who love taking photos will join the photography club, and movie-goers are always taking part in movie salons and exchanging mutual ideas and thoughts on the same movie. Undoubtedly, being together with people having the shared aspirations and enthusiasm is the source of happiness.

博物館的段子 [記憶複寫第58篇]

Secondly, visiting museums can also provide people with ample knowledge about the present magnificence of a country. Ranging from art and science to agriculture, museums truly cover a vast area. For instance, in science museums, demonstrations, interactive programs are adopted to introduce important scientific achievements. Visitors are given the opportunity to probe deeper into the world of science and experience its marvels. Evidently, this educational and meaningful tour will be a cherished memory for a long time. Museums of modern art are also worth a visit. With a large collection of paintings, folk art, sculptures, ceramics and metalwork, art galleries present colorful aspects of the country』s cultures. Just like an open gate, museums invite people into a paradise of knowledge.

獨立部分無非就是沒思路、寫不順、寫不對三個問題，沒思路的一定要考前多看看歷年真題串講，多看題才能確保找思路快啊；至於寫不順或者寫不對的同學，那就考前多記段子，自己寫不順、寫不對就少寫唄，我用別人的總不至於出問題了吧。但提醒大家，用別人的東西一定要首先記准，其次別忘了扣題，千萬不要得意忘形。

上述所有材料在考前衝刺班都有提供，大家如果考前時間比較緊，可以參加我們的衝刺班。通過模板和段子衝刺一下。模板必須搞熟，除了看示範也要自己套幾個題目看看。段子要首先搞清楚思路，然後爭取記住，如果記不住就把重點句式記熟，其餘的東西臨場發揮。

綜合寫作

總體觀點

保護加拿大的一種地方語言 [Inutitut]，閱讀給出一些導致語言消失的因素，而聽力進行了一一反駁

閱讀部分

• 調查顯示當地16歲以下，只有20%的人說本地話，而且這個比例還在減少
• 當地漁民為了更加國際化，更傾向於說國際化的語言比如英語，很多父母不鼓勵孩子說方言
• 電視和電台大部分都是用英語和法語播的，對年輕人影響很大

聽力部分

• 說當地話的實際比例會高一些，因為調查中的當地話僅僅指的是傳統的方言，而實際上很多年輕人說當代的方言
• 漁業從業者也要跟當地人交易，而當地人直說本地方言，所以對於工作的人來說掌握方言還是很重要的，很多父母也開始意識到這一點
• 電視電台確實是英語和法語，但是網路上使用更多的是本地的語言，而且受眾也很多

分析 這又是一個非常經典的理論證明題，此類題目無非就是從證據本身或者從推理的角度來進行反駁，如果大家仔細想想就會發現，本題的三個點反駁的方法都是以偏概全，首先本地化分成傳統和現代，其次漁民分成和國外的人交流以及和本國當地人溝通，媒體分成網路和電視，希望通過這個題目大家能夠掌握以偏概全的攻擊閱讀的分論點的套路。

綜合部分大家除了練習聽力之外，其實也可以多刷題，搞清楚閱讀和聽力的反駁關係，做多了之後猜的能力會大大加強，因為他們反駁的方式都出奇的相似，從而形成做題的感覺，大大的減少聽力的壓力。