12月17日托福寫作考後分析

獨立寫作

Should children spend most time playing and studying or they should be required to help the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning.

題型：兩元素比較類

思路：一邊倒

2016年最後一場考試，ETS 再次發了個福利，出了一個非常簡單的舊題，可能想讓大家過個好年吧：

一邊倒

支持學習和玩的話可以寫學生學習壓力很大，只有多花時間在學習上才能考到更好的成績，同時也需要玩兒來緩解壓力；另外，我們可以攻擊做家務的壞處，如果學生被強迫做家務，就會讓他們從學習中分心，無法提高學習效率。當然，如果支持家務的話可以寫做家務可以提高非學術能力，畢竟我們可以說做家務也是需要合作的嗎；同時做家務可以孩子們變得更加自律並且做事兒有條理；

分類討論

喜歡分類的同學可以從地區貧富的角度入手，有錢的地方就主要以學習和玩兒為主，畢竟經濟發達，競爭激烈，一定要保證學習和玩兒的時間才行；家務家長們都會找家政做了；然而條件差的地方的孩子就沒這麼好命了，還是得幫助父母分擔一些啊。畢竟父母也很忙，孩子又不少，孩子們不幫忙做家務的話父母也忙不過來啊。

壓力的段子 [記憶複寫第6篇]

It is high time that government should arouse people』s awareness of the importance of physical soundness. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-health state. Given that it is governments『 responsibilities to improve citizens』 health condition—governments should increase access to public exercise equipment in the neighborhood and raise people』s awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly through mass media.

自律的段子[記憶複寫第1篇]

Second, a student who often cleans up his room is usually more self-disciplined and self-discipline is an important character shared by almost all successful people. So tiring and boring is the process of tidying the room regularly that it becomes a real challenge for many people. As a consequence, very few people can actually keep at it. But as long as one holds on to this habit day after day, he must have strong execution as well as persistence and diligence, which are all required qualities of a successful person. Steve Jobs, a man of great success, is highly self-disciplined. His idea of 「simplicity」 is reflected not only in his products but also in his own room.

分心的段子 [記憶複寫第3篇]

Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. A good case in point is my own experience. When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.

獨立部分無非就是沒思路、寫不順、寫不對三個問題，沒思路的一定要考前多看看歷年真題串講，多看題才能確保找思路快啊；至於寫不順或者寫不對的同學，那就考前多記段子，自己寫不順、寫不對就少寫唄，我用別人的總不至於出問題了吧。但提醒大家，用別人的東西一定要首先記准，其次別忘了扣題，千萬不要得意忘形。

上述所有材料在寫作機經班都有提供，大家如果考前時間比較緊，可以參加我們的9.9的機經班，點我報名。通過模板和段子衝刺一下。模板必須搞熟，除了看示範也要自己套幾個題目看看。段子要首先搞清楚思路，然後爭取記住，如果記不住就把重點句式記熟，其餘的東西臨場發揮。

綜合寫作

總體觀點

閱讀和聽力討論的是是否應該在路上建 solar panel，閱讀反對，而聽力支持

閱讀部分

• solar panels 不適合建立在 flat road 上，應該建在 tilt places 上面，因為平面的效率比較低，一般有角度效率才會高
• 玻璃易碎可能破壞輪胎從而導致交通事故；而且玻璃還特別滑
• 費錢造價高

聽力部分

• in overcast or cloudy weather solar panels can sunlight reflect in many directions, 在這種情況下，flat road 上面的太陽板更有效率
• 已經研究出載重大而且不容易分裂的玻璃；同時， new material has special tough texture as a result of which it can be used on wet and icy roads
• 在荷蘭做的試驗表明，一個 solar panel 半年的產能可以供一戶人家使用一年，多出來的部分可以賣給其他國家來 offset cost

分析

綜合部分大家除了練習聽力之外，其實也可以多刷題，搞清楚閱讀和聽力的反駁關係，做多了之後猜的能力會大大加強，因為他們反駁的方式都出奇的相似，從而形成做題的感覺，大大的減少聽力的壓力。

• 閱讀說不適合在平面，因為效率低，而聽力反駁的時候是從以偏概全的角度入手的，通常效率可能確實低下，但是陰天的時候就很高
• 第二個點就是直接攻擊證據本身，閱讀說滑、易碎，人家聽力就說不滑、不容易碎，這種直接攻擊證據的反駁方法並不是特別多
• 類似的費用問題，大家一定要敏感，整個流程中某個環節花錢，並不一定代表其他地方就不能賺錢，所以也可以看成是以偏概全，就類似於氫能源燃燒的時候不產生二氧化碳，但是生產的時候會產生啊。

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