12月3日寫作考後分析

01-29

獨立寫作

Nowadays people are more willing to help others who they do not know (for example giving food or clothing) than they were in the past.n

話題：社會類

題型：一元素比較類

重複：2013年1月26日[！歷年真題串講必看！]

一邊倒 今天竟然跟上次一樣又是一個今昔對比的題目。如果我們一邊倒的話，完全可以考慮不同意，首先套上壓力的段子，現在人壓力大，當然不願意幫助別人。除了壓力大之外，現在這個社會蛇少最基本的信任，也是一個非常重要的原因，這個可以套廣告的段子。再次，我們還可以寫現在媒體都在關注名人的私生活，並沒有起到合理的導向作用，從而套上媒體的段子。
分類凡是今昔對比的題目在分類的時候我們的思路都是類似的，都可以按照國家和地區的發展水平來分，條件好的地方自然願意，畢竟有錢、畢竟受教育程度高、畢竟科技先進；然而，條件比較差的地方這些東西都沒有明顯的改善，不可能存在比過去更願意的情況。

壓力的段子 [記憶複寫第6篇]

Firstly, it is high time that government arouse people』s awareness of the importance of physical soundness. Along with the acceleration of social development, people, especially young people, are confronted with unprecedentedly fierce competition. They need to work very hard to guarantee a decent life, which causes them way heavier pressures than before. Under such circumstances, most of them are prone to be caught in a sub-healthy state. Given that it is governments』 responsibilities to improve citizens』 health condition, government should increase access to public exercise equipment in the neighborhood and raise people』s awareness of the importance of doing exercises regularly through mass media.

廣告的段子[記憶複寫第29篇]

Another case in point falls into the field of education and training industry. In lack of strict supervision from the government, some training schools in China have always been misleading their customers. For the expansion of enrolment, they tend to claim that after taking a certain number of courses, any student will achieve high scores required to enter universities. In fact, such statement is ridiculous for it fails to consider each individual』s situation. In other words, nobody can be guaranteed that he or she is sure to succeed in an exam.

廣告的段子[記憶複寫第29篇]

Nevertheless, it is not reasonable to criticize the mass media, including television, newspapers, magazines and so forth, for its excessive exposure on the personal lives of famous people. In fact, it is the public, to a large extent, rather than the mass media, that is paying too much attention on celebrities』 personal lives. This phenomenon is well interpreted with the fact that many people will spare time to gossip about famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars. Meanwhile, since most organizations of mass media industry are audience-oriented and mostly driven by business motivation, television program producers, as well as columnists and writers are always aware of what the public want to see, and thus tend to expose famous people』s anecdotes in order to pander to tastes of the public.

備考建議

獨立部分無非就是沒思路、寫不順、寫不對三個問題，沒思路的一定要考前多看看歷年真題串講，最近大部分都是之前考過的舊題。多看串講一方面可能遇到原題，另一方面確保找思路快啊；至於寫不順或者寫不對的同學，那就考前多記段子，自己寫不順、寫不對就少寫唄，我用別人的總不至於出問題了吧。但提醒大家，用別人的東西一定要首先記准，其次別忘了扣題，千萬不要得意忘形。

綜合寫作

總體觀點

Vampire squid 不會吃 marine snow 一些海洋裡面的 debris

閱讀部分

marine snow 在海底。而海底氧氣少，Vampire squid 缺乏氧氣沒法生存
vampire squid 捕食的時候 collect on arm 然後 bring the food to eat，需要保持一個某一個姿勢，容易被 predator 發現
和 Vampire squid 同一個物種的其他生物不吃 marine snow，而是以捕食活物為生，所以它也應該是類似情況

聽力部分

追獵物的時候需要氧氣，而 Vampire squid 不用 chase prey，所以不需要太多的氧氣
深海中 Vampire squid 皮膚比較暗，不容易被發現；而且即使被發現，它也會突然變亮，嚇跑predator
吃 marine snow 的話不會跟同種別的生物競爭，他們反而更容易獲得食物

分析這又是一個非常經典的理論證明題，此類題目無非就是從證據本身或者從推理的角度來進行反駁，比如第一個點，聽力承認了閱讀給的證據是對的，但是指出閱讀考慮的比較片面的地方，確實需要氧氣但並不是一直需要那麼多；第二個點直接就攻擊證據本身，閱讀說容易發現，而聽力針鋒相對，並且給出了進一步的證據。思路就是首先閱讀的不對，其次即使你說的對，也不是事兒；第三個點就是一個極其典型的錯誤的橫向類比，大家只要看到作者試圖通過一個做法適用於A推出也試用於B的話，肯定就是這個錯誤。聽力必然會給出二者的不同點。而正是這些不同點導致閱讀的說法是有問題的。