一步一步搞定雅思寫作（58）之青年問題

這次依舊是2014年的老題目，雅思今年有點懶哈哈哈

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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing? Give solutions to these problems.

Brainstorming部分，有哪些問題呀：

1. 生活成本高啊，房租很要命~
2. 找個工作可難了，就業人數相當大~

如何解決呢：

1. 第一個問題，政府去提供一些廉租房嘛
2. 第二個問題，年輕人還是需要更多的知識和工作經驗才好

正文部分：

第一段，做個簡單的同義改寫

Currently, living in big cities, young people face many problems and difficulties. This essay will discuss the problems they encounter and then give some solutions.

第二段，寫一下房租的問題

To begin with, it is difficult for young adults to cover living expenses. It is acknowledged that houses in metropolises are so expensive that normal young people cannot afford to buy one. Many of them have to rent a house for living temporarily, and sometimes if they do not ask help from their parents, they even cannot pay the rent. Therefore, due to the high living expenses in major cities, many young people often suffer economic pressure.

第三段，寫一下這個就業壓力

Furthermore, young adults face severe competition. Compared to villages and towns, cities can provide residents with more jobs, which attracts a lot of young people to work there. However, when many young people apply for the same position, enterprises will recruit the most excellent candidate while others have to seek other jobs. In other words, young adults in cities have to face failure for a lot of times before they secure decent employment.

第四段，解決方法

In order to tackle these issues, the authorities can provide young people with state housing. Then, young people do not need to worry about the expense of housing, which allows them to stay at cities longer and seek more opportunities. In addition, young people need to become more competitive if they intend to find decent jobs. Nowadays, employers focus on not only certificates but also working experience. Rich internship experience can assist young graduates to be hired by excellent enterprises with a higher possibility.

第五段，小小總結~

In sum, the problems young people encounter include a high price for housing and severe competition for jobs. It is necessary for governments to offer young people low-cost housing, and meanwhile, young people need to improve their knowledge and working experience before seeking jobs.

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