雅思寫作考官教你大作文應該怎麼浪

每個句子中的核心單詞會用粗體表示出來

1. Some children may be allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please.

雅思寫作的時候大部分同學不會去用please當做動詞，這裡的please相信各位也能很輕鬆的判斷出來，as they please就等於as they want。

2. I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate of others, the whole community would benefit.

寫雅思大作文上的時候，我們一般寫到「誰應該解決某問題」的句子，最常見的寫法是sb should be responsible for.....或者sb should take the initiative to do sth

這裡，考官告訴我們sb不一定非要當做主語，比如我們翻譯「為了環境保護，政府應該設定更嚴格的法律」這句話，可以寫成：

The solution to environmental pollution lies with governments that should implement stricter policies.

3. The government should fund this kind of parental support.

提供資金幫助是雅思寫作中很常用的表達，一般的表達是give sb financial support，這裡可以直接應用fund一個詞表示提供資金。

4. The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.

這裡是幫助大家去翻譯「高中畢業之後直接上大學」的說法，可能更多的同學就是字面翻譯成students who go to universities directly after graduating from high school，pass directly from school to university更加地道一些~

5. Just like movie stars, some sports stars live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

這裡是稍微區別一下extravagant和luxury的區別，extravagant更多指的是沒有節制的那種，而luxury一般是指something expensive that you enjoy but do not really need，這兩個詞之間還是有區別哈~

6. However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that change is always for the better.

這裡很適合用來寫在讓步轉折的結構第二段最後一句話，例如：

However, the fact that students could save more time with distance learning is not the same as assuming that it should be promoted to everyone.

7. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive.

mutually exclusive最早是被我用來形容做brainstorming的時候，觀點之間是不可以互相包括的，這個短語可以用來替換的就是雙邊討論題目中的句子：

These two opinions may not contradict each other.

These two opinions may not be mutually exclusive.

8. A person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.

講到老闆，大家可能就只容易想到bosses和employers，superiors同樣可以當做bosses的替換詞~

9. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.

resentment替換掉dissatisfaction。

10. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.

coach services意指大巴車服務，不一定非要再用bus去形容公交車啦~

11. Children』s brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilities learning another language, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self-consciousness.

be programmed to do sth指的是sth被設置成什麼樣的狀態，這裡指的就是小孩還有接收語言信息的狀態~

12. The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centered approach, thus maintaining learners』 enthusiasm and progress.

the primary timetable意指小學的時間表~

13. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening.

粗體部分最生動的翻譯就是葛優癱哈哈~或者概括成a sedentary lifestyle。

14. However, interest in sport is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who need them.

the already fit意指身體狀況已經很不錯的人~

15. The punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones---an outcome which may well result in the children starting to bully others.

其實這整句話我都想讓你們背下來，這是關於校園暴力的一個很好的句子，特別是be of a physical nature和bully others這兩個說法。

16. All people are entitled to have access to the same products.

be entitled to類似於有權力去做某事，類似於have the right of......

17. Modern toys are designed to be educational as well as fun, and concerned parents carefully select products which might speed their child』s acquisition of numbers or the alphabet.

記住哦，toy對children的好處不要寫成release their pressure，3~8歲的小孩子為啥會有那麼多的壓力，符合小孩子的好處就是多識字會算數。

跟acquisition有關的短語還有second language acquisition，意為二語習得，也就指的是非母語的人學習第二外語這件事情。

18. On the social side, older children may become targets of envy from classmates, if they are perceived as having far more possessions than their peers.

peers意指同齡人，這個同齡人可以是年紀相仿，也可以是社會階級相仿，所以可以用來指代的一般是classmates或者是workmates這樣的詞~

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