一步一步搞定雅思寫作（48）之搬家換工作

終於開始雅思寫作的漫漫補更之路了......

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People change their jobs and place of residence several times during life. Is this a positive or negative development?

這一次的題目問的是搬家換工作是個好事還是個壞處，完全可以拆開來寫~

好處：

1. 搬家有利於人們體驗不同的風土人情呀~

壞處：

1. 搬家的話，沒有了社區歸屬感呀，鄰居都不認識~
2. 換工作太勤快，沒辦法在任何一個領域獲得足夠讓人成功的工作技能和經驗呢~

正文部分：

第一段，同義改寫

There is a phenomenon that people will resign and find new jobs, as well as move to different places for living, several times in their life. Personally speaking, it is a negative development.

第二段，先說一下搬家有利於開闊視野~

Admittedly, moving to different places for living can broaden people』s horizons. If citizens live in a small village and never want to live in a different circumstance, they actually lose the opportunity of seeing the big world. However, residing in a new place allows individuals to experience different cultures through tasting different food and using different languages, which can enrich individuals』 life. Nevertheless, there still exist some drawbacks brought by changing places of living and jobs frequently.

第三段，轉折回來，開始說換工作太勤快的問題~

To begin with, people may fail to achieve their goals if they often change their careers. Practice makes perfect, which means that people need to practice their skills and accumulate their working experience for a long time before they are able to fulfill their targets. For example, a doctor probably needs several years to learn how to perform a surgery. If people just change careers frequently, they can hardly succeed since they lack necessary working experience.

第四段，再說一下搬家讓人們對家沒啥概念

In addition, moving house makes it difficult for residents to have a sense of community. When dwellers live in a community for a long time, more often than not, they are quite familiar with surroundings, as well as their neighbors. However, if people move their houses regularly, they probably just regard their houses as places to sleep and do not have time to communicate with neighbors. As a result, they will lack a sense of belonging because they do not have emotional ties with their houses.

第五段，做一個小小總結~

To sum up, it is a negative development for people to change careers and move houses frequently, considering that they cannot practice their skills in a specific domain and they do not have emotional bonds with their houses and local communities.

個人水平有限，歡迎捉蟲+提出意見~