2015年雅思寫作真題系列（3）

這個題目是關於旅遊和環境保護的題目，brainstorming和真實寫作的難度都不算是特別的大~

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Scientists and tourists travel to remote natural environment, such as South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

偏遠地區旅遊and探險的好處：

1. 人們能看到一些沒見過的東西呀~北極熊是平常人能夠經常用自己雙眼看得到的么？不可能，所以去一些奇怪的地方還是能拓展一下自己的視野的~

偏遠地區旅遊and探險的壞處：

1. 艾瑪，偏遠的地方太危險了，出了事連個人都沒有，那可怎麼辦= =

2. 有些地區的生態系統特別脆弱，人類干預的多了，可能破壞當地的環境~

這一篇文章可能出現的同義詞替換包括：

1. environmental pollution/degradation/deterioration, ecosystem, ecological balance

2. sites, scenes, spots,

感覺同義替換詞也就這些需要注意一下，其他的並沒有特別需要提醒的~

When it comes to a phenomenon that some remote sites have been popular among curious travelers and scientists, some people may argue that there exist more benefits acquired than detriments caused by this phenomenon, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, traveling to those remote areas could broaden viewers』 horizons. For travelers who have visited a lot of countries, they may not feel surprised when they go to another country for tourism. However, some natural scenes, such as South Pole, may not be accessible for most tourists, which makes them mysterious and attractive, and visitors could experience the unique beauty of nature that they cannot enjoy in cities. Nevertheless, admiring the beauty of nature is not the same as assuming that tourists and scientists should explore those remote areas.

To begin with, danger may exist during the exploration of those remote sites. When travelers do not feel well in some famous spots, they are able to ask for assistance from staff or other visitors. However, in those remote areas where there are few dwellers, once people are hurt by accident, they cannot expect any help. Thus, security cannot be maintained for tourists and scientists if they explore some desolate areas for tourism or science.

Furthermore, exploring those areas may lead to environmental degradation. In remote areas, such as polar regions, there are a limited number of species and plants. Providing that some scientists or visitors choose to live there for a period of time, their behavior, such as throwing away rubbish, may damage the ecosystem, no matter consciously or unconsciously. Then, polar animals may suffer from such environmental deterioration.

In sum, the cons may outweigh pros of conducting scientific research and developing tourism in remote areas, considering that there may exist safety issues and ecological balance is too fragile.

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