一步一步搞定雅思寫作（45）之學習不刻苦？

01-25

暑期總算快要過去了，我這雅思寫作範文也可以繼續更新了，真是之前忙的要死要活的......

哦對，最近有好幾個7分的反饋，我就不在知乎發了，有興趣去公眾號看廣告哈~

上上次的題目看起來容易，但其實藏了很多的坑哦，很容易寫歪了~

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The pressure on school and university students has increased, so students should work hard from a young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Brainstorming部分，支持應該早點學的：

小學初中多學點，高中大學的壓力就輕啊~（這個點是最容易寫假大空的，很多同學都去寫了以後有利於找工作，但是我們的主語啊，請各位注意，是在school and university students再往前的中小學的學生哇，那麼對於這麼小的學生來說，寫到就業，確實假大空了哦）

不應該早學：

反而容易對學習厭煩
沒時間去發展自己的興趣愛好~

正文部分：

第一段，同義改寫，表達一下觀點

Some people believe that students need to work diligently from an early age since they face increasing more pressure at high school and university. However, I cannot agree with this opinion.

第二段，承認一下早學的好處~

Admittedly, studying harder can make students become more competitive when they receive higher education. It is acknowledged that courses one learns at high school and university are more difficult than those of primary and secondary school. If students can learn more knowledge earlier, when they go to high school and university, they probably find that some subjects are quite easy for them since they learn some theories in advance. However, admitting merits brought by studying harder is not assuming that young students must spend more time on it.

第三段，讓學生太早注重學習容易帶來反效果

To begin with, students may lose their interest in study if they are forced to study from an early age. For most primary and secondary students, it may be difficult for them to understand the reason why they need to work hard; in other words, they probably lack motivation for study. Providing that schools or parents demand them to concentrate on courses, taking classes will become a boring task for them. Then, it is more likely that students will dislike study, but not focus on it.

第四段，沒時間發展自己的興趣了

In addition, spending too much time on study, students will have insufficient time to develop their own hobbies. In the current era, receiving higher education is not the only option for students and many of them can make a living through their personal interests. For example, some students show their talents in taking photos or playing electronic games and there are a lot of photographers and players who live a comfortable life. If students are asked to spend more time on study, their talents in other fields may be neglected.

第五段，做一個小小總結~

To sum up, there is no need for students to study harder when they are young, considering that they do not have time for developing their own interests and some of them even dislike study.

如有問題，敬請反饋~個人水平有限，歡迎指正+捉蟲~