大作文寫作思路101之第三講

除了同學的作文外，老外的高分作文也是非常值得學習的

他山之石，可以攻玉。這句話十分深刻，它並不是說我們應該一味的抄襲和模仿，而是應該學習前人的雅思作文思維和方法，通過吸收他們的知識去彌補自己大腦中的空缺，讓我們的思想更完善、自成一體。

今天就講一講老外的高分作文，如何逐字逐句地分析他們的文章，並學習思維方式和技巧。

－第三期－

文章爭論的焦點：歷史知識是否對現代的生活有價值。

關於行為準則方面的價值、判斷標準方面的價值、借鑒意義方面的價值等等。

所以我認為本文的關鍵詞是：benefits , valuable source of information；

這是我的個人看法，歡迎拍磚討論

不過今天不重點講我的思路，我們一起著重學習下老外的文章是怎麼一步步寫下去的。

Function of history in modern life has become a heated topic of discussion in the modern world.

這句話作為文章首句，非常好的引出題目的背景討論：歷史的作用是討論的焦點

Despite the arguments refuting the importance of

非常出彩的銜接，我自己在沒看範文前也想了很多句型，如何解釋題目並引出自己的觀點，都沒有這句寫的那麼完美

這裡請留意，關於discuss both views and give your opinion這類題目，第一段並不一定要給出自己觀點，但如果你的句子能很好的照顧到這一點，那麼寫出觀點一定不扣分

On the one hand, some people believe that historical knowledge is of no useful benefits for modern life. One noticeable reason is that learning about historical and sorrowful events in the past would bring painful feelings and loss of faith in humanity rather than certain benefits. For example, memorizing terrorist attacks or inhumane events in the past seems to leave doleful emotion and render modern people miserable since they cannot reverse the history.

作為主要段落的前三句話，分別是觀點＋原因＋例子。

我個人認為，我們在寫作時思考的順序是反過來的，也就是先想例子，再想例子給我們帶來什麼啟示，最後想如何組織句子去扣住觀點。

正如作者所說，他認為證明歷史知識對現代生活沒有好處的原因是，歷史留給我們的都是痛苦，比如過去的恐怖襲擊除了留給大家無限傷痛之外毫無其它。

雖然例子悲觀，但能很好的說明歷史知識無用這一觀點。

In addition, most knowledge legacies from the past have become outdated in the modern contexts in which breakthroughs take place daily. Therefore, findings from researching history would be deemed unnecessary and have limited values to modern development.

緊接上一句，作者在原有基礎上做了補充說明。由於歷史的知識對現代生活環境來說已經過時，所以也就沒有必要去過多挖掘歷史了

On the other hand, I am of the opinion that one of the most valuable references nowadays comes from history. Firstly, young generation can have more opportunities to access and inherit legacies from their ancestors. Past knowledge and discoveries could create a concrete foundation on which people can further develop further advances with the goal of generating considerable contributions to modern humankind.

順著反方觀點，作者開啟第三段，標紅部分是值得學習的起頭方式。

第二句話的觀點，我一開始還很驚訝，我以為作者寫偏題了，沒想到劃線部分就是作者的解釋，他解釋祖先遺留財產是指知識和發現，而不是金錢或其它有形資產。所以這些無形資產才是對現代人類貢獻最大的。也就是我開頭所講「他山之石，可以攻玉」的意思。

Secondly, learning mistakes in the previous growing process are immensely precious experience that modern people can use to avoid previous generations mistakes. For example, by analyzing causes leading to disastrous world wars, governmental officials can withdraw lessons learnt, trying to compromise and abstain from provocations triggering another war.

作為反方第二個觀點，作者以世界大戰歷史為背景，講述現在人們應該學會從歷史裡吸收教訓，避免再犯前人犯過的錯。再看上一句，兩個觀點本身從正反面去論證「歷史經驗和教訓是對現在的人類有很大的作用」

這樣的討論方法，值得借鑒。

In conclusion, from the above reasons, even though the role of history is undermined by some people, I would embrace the contribution of history as humankind』s precious source of information.

簡簡單單兩句話，即總結了第二段也總結了第三段，並強調了自己的觀點。

總結

＊正反面觀點中，作者分別舉了一個例子去佐證

＊討論反方觀點時給出的2個理由，本身又正反對立，加強了觀點說服力

＊部分句子的開頭都很出色，使得文章連貫性很強，一氣呵成的感覺，值得學習

最後附上完整文章，供大家一次性讀完它

Function of history in modern life has become a heated topic of discussion in the modern world. Despite the arguments refuting the importance of historical knowledge, I am more convinced that history is an invaluable source of information for contemporary humans.

On the one hand, some people believe that historical knowledge is of no useful benefits for modern life. One noticeable reason is that learning about historical and sorrowful events in the past would bring painful feelings and loss of faith in humanity rather than certain benefits. For example, memorizing terrorist attacks or inhumane events in the past seems to leave doleful emotion and render modern people miserable since they cannot reverse the http://history.In addition, most knowledge legacies from the past have become outdated in the modern contexts in which breakthroughs take place daily. Therefore, findings from researching history would be deemed unnecessary and have limited values to modern development.

On the other hand, I am of the opinion that one of the most valuable references nowadays comes from history. Firstly, young generation can have more opportunities to access and inherit legacies from their ancestors. Past knowledge and discoveries could create a concrete foundation on which people can further develop further advances with the goal of generating considerable contributions to modern humankind. Secondly, learning mistakes in the previous growing process are immensely precious experience that modern people can use to avoid previous generations mistakes. For example, by analyzing causes leading to disastrous world wars, governmental officials can withdraw lessons learnt, trying to compromise and abstain from provocations triggering another war.

In conclusion, from the above reasons, even though the role of history is undermined by some people, I would embrace the contribution of history as humankind』s precious source of information.

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