一步一步搞定雅思寫作（12）

上周雅思寫作的題目是重複2014年7月10日雅思寫作的題目，基本上沒有變化，可以當做同一道題目去處理，問的是關於政府給運動員撥款而不給大眾撥款是不是好事，這道題目倒是只講過兩次左右，沒有像上次那道題目起碼講了幾十次......

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Some countries achieve international sporting success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

做brainstorming的時候，大概左右兩邊各能想出來兩個觀點：

覺得給運動員專門撥款的好處：

1. 有利於運動員保持自己的運動成績，可以繼續取得好名次~

2. 專用器材的利用率高一些，畢竟運動員基本上天天鍛煉，但給大眾修公共設施，挺容易荒廢的

覺得給運動員專門撥款的壞處：

1. 大眾設施就沒錢去建造了嘛~群眾表示想鍛個練都沒辦法

2. 大眾對於體育的理解可能就只是「擊敗對方」，而不是休閑娛樂~

這一道題目可能用到的同義替換包括：

1. use, utilize, make use of

2. spend money/budgets on, allocate money/budgets to, fund, focus/concentrate on

3. facilities/devices/equipment, specialized for athletes/professional players, the public, amateurs

正文：

第一段做簡單的同義改寫，把自己的觀點給亮出來，我這裡是選擇了覺得給運動員撥款是積極的事情~

When it comes to a phenomenon that some countries prefer to allocate more money to facilities designed for athletes rather than spend money on public facilities, some people argue that such a phenomenon may be a negative development, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

第二段承認一下大眾確實就有點遭殃，畢竟政府的錢也是有限的= =

Admittedly, the public may lack facilities for exercise without devices provided by governments. It is acknowledged that governments』 budget is limited but what governments need to improve is countless. Providing that governments use money to purchase more professional devices for athletes, comparatively, the amount of fund for public facilities will be reduced. Then, some communities may even lack sports facilities for their residents. Nevertheless, it is still a positive development for countries to focus on training professional players.

第三段來講好處一，就是保持好名次~

To begin with, constructing more devices specialized for athletes could serve to maintain their performances. In order to defeat others in international games, such as the Olympic Games, countries, even after gaining a lot of golden medals, need to guarantee that their athletes could perform better in the future. It is natural and reasonable for those governments to fund their players and offer them better equipment and devices. Then, their players could maintain their performances and countries could gain honor and reputation from those matches as well.

第四段是從效率角度來說，給運動員花錢買的設備更容易被得到合理利用

In addition, sports facilities could be better used by athletes. Even in some communities where there are a lot of sports facilities accessible, occupied by work, citizens may neglect those facilities to some degree. Compared with building facilities for the public, allocating budgets to professional facilities seems more effective since most athletes will make use of those devices quite frequently. Thus, funding athletes could lead to a better utilization of sports facilities.

最後一段做個小小的總結~

In sum, it is still positive for countries to concentrate on training athletes and provide them with more facilities, considering that players are potent to perform better in competitions and they could also make better use of those devices.

如有意見，歡迎捉蟲+反饋~