一步一步搞定雅思寫作（5）
如果這是你第一次看我寫的雅思寫作文章，麻煩請先移步我的另一個答案之後再回來看這篇~
如何提高雅思寫作成績？ - 季元的回答這次的雅思寫作題目好像是官方給我們開的一個不大不小的玩笑，不過價值2000rmb的玩笑真的有點貴就是了......
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Some people believe there are intelligentlife forms existing on other planets and it is better to send messages to them,but others think it is a bad idea because it is very dangerous to do this.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
各位可以看到，題目問的是關於人類是否應該嘗試跟外星物種取得聯繫，這麼個題目，或者叫破題，感覺要主動讓我們大開腦洞似的......當然，第一眼看上去這個題目是比較唬人，但靜下心來好好想想，其實也不是特別的麻煩。
為什麼人們應該嘗試接觸一下呢？原因可以是看看能不能從別的物種那裡獲得更多先進的科技；為什麼有風險呢，萬一別的物種還跑到地球來搶奪資源呢嘛。這兩個理由應該都不算難想，最後我的觀點可以寫「未來一定會去探索，但是現在我們還是too young too simple，不要老想著搞個大新聞」這樣子就差不多啦哈哈~
與我們這道題相關的一些短語和單詞可能包括：
mankind, human beings, human race, human;
aliens, alien civilization, creatures, life forms
send messages to, communicate with, contact, get in touch with;
advanced technology, mature, outer space, space exploration;
老樣子，第一段我們要做的就是同義改寫：
When it comes to the issue about the possibilityof aliens』 existence on other planets, some people argue that there should becommunication between human beings and other creatures if they really exist,but others believe that it may lead to some potential risks for human beings tocommunicate with unknown life forms.
第二段我們先去說一下為啥要接觸外星文明：
On one hand, mankind may benefit fromcommunicating with other creatures if they own advanced technologies. It istrue that human beings have developed numerous technologies currently, but someaspects, such as space exploration, still need to be improved. If other planetspossess technologies human beings do not have, maybe they could assist us tomake a progress. Thus, sending messages to them could allow human beings to have more technologies from the universe possibly..
第三段我們去講一下風險到底在哪裡：
On the other hand, getting in touch withaliens may be detrimental to human beings since they may invade the earth.Countries on the earth will fight with each other because they need to acquire moreresources. Similarly, if alien civilization also intended to reap some profitsfrom the earth, space wars would be an inevitable consequence. Therefore, in order to maintaina peaceful life on the earth, human beings should be really cautious aboutsending messages to outer space.
第四段是我自己的一個折中的觀點：
From my own perspective, exploring spacewill be a compulsory task for mankind sooner or later, but scientists should be patientbefore they make more breakthroughs. After all, human beings are just potent tosend their astronauts into outer space for limited time and our technology isstill not so mature. Also, there still exist all kinds of conflicts amongcountries on the earth and developing domestic economy should be the toppriority for most governments to improve their citizens』 life quality. Thus,human beings may not be prepared to welcome alien civilization in the currentera.
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