如何翻譯《What A Wonderful World》的歌詞？

01-04

I see trees of green, red roses too
I see them bloom for me and you
And I think to myself what a wonderful world.
I see skies of blue and clouds of white

The bright blessed days, the dark sacred nights
And I think to myself what a wonderful world.
The colors of the rainbow so pretty in the sky
Are also on the faces of people going by
I see friends shaking hands saying how do you do
They"re really saying I love you.
I hear babies cry, I watch them grow
They"ll learn much more than I"ll never know

And I think to myself what a wonderful world
Yes I think to myself what a wonderful world.
要合折押韻，節奏感也和原作契合。不必逐字直譯，意境更加重要。

這首歌實在太喜歡。無意境翻譯如下，唱是沒問題的——

我看見綠樹和紅色玫瑰

我看見它們為你我綻顏

我對自己說，多麼奇妙的世界

我看見藍天和白色雲朵

明亮的晴日和聖潔黑夜

我對自己說，多麼奇妙的世界

那些多姿的彩虹在天空里絢爛

顏色映照在人們步履匆匆的笑面

我見朋友們握手招呼近來好否

其實他們在說我愛你

我聽嬰兒哭泣，看它們長大

它們將學會我未知的那些

我對自己說，多麼奇妙的世界

BTW 說明裡的歌詞有不少複數寫成了單數，故改之。

I see trees of green 看那青枝綠葉

red roses too 看花紅時節

I see them bloom 它們美麗的詩篇

for me and you 是為你我而寫

And I think to myself 我不禁讚歎

what a wonderful world. 多麼美好的世界

I see skies of blue 看那蔚藍天空

and clouds of white 看白雲飄曳

The bright blessed day 明媚的白晝

and dark sacred night 靜謐的深夜

And I think to myself 我不禁讚歎

What a wonderful world 多麼美好的世界

The colors of the rainbow 那繽紛的彩虹

so pretty in the sky 把藍天裝點

Are also on the faces 落在我們臉上

of people going by 當我置身這一切

I see friends shaking hands 看人們和睦相處

sayin" "How do you do?" 互相噓寒問暖

They"re really saying 他們彼此相愛

"I love you" 彼此相攜

I hear babies crying 昨日啼哭的嬰孩

I watch them grow 轉眼都已長大

They"ll learn much more 他們聰明伶俐

than I"ll ever know 早已將我超越

And I think to myself 我不禁讚歎

What a wonderful world 多麼美好的世界

見綠樹之蔥鬱，亦如紅玫之瑰，

盛開之於君妾，

世間何其美！

望天之湛藍，仰雲之鑿白；

明媚而佑日兮，沉暗且懼夜凄，

世間何其安！

虹霓煥彩昭昭，

路人神氣揚揚，

相見歡而執手問恙，

心相印戚戚私語。

也聞嬰啼，如觀齒童他日長成，

知慧行德恐終為其左，

世間何其嘆！

翻了一個韻腳和格式工整一點的版本。

I see trees of green, red roses too

I see them bloom for me and you

And I think to myself what a wonderful world

看那綠樹青青，看那花朵翩翩

你與我置身其間

看，多麼美好的世界

I see skies of blue and clouds of white

The bright blessed day, the dark sacred night

And I think to myself what a wonderful world

看那天空蔚藍，看那雲輕如棉

日與夜相互交迭

看，多麼美好的世界

The colors of the rainbow so pretty in the sky

Are also on the faces of people going by

I see friends shaking hands saying how do you do

But they"re really saying I love you

看那繽紛彩虹，映照每張笑臉

人與人噓寒問暖

每一雙手都彼此相攜

I hear babies cry, and I watched them grow

They"ll learn much more than I"ll ever know

And I think to myself what a wonderful world

看那嬰孩啼哭，轉眼長大成人

終有天將我超越

看，多麼美好的世界

看那綠樹兒蔥蔥，花朵兒綻放

綻放呀，在你我的心中

我深情的呼喚：江山竟如此多嬌！

瞧那朵朵的白雲兒，藍藍的天

與日踏步，與月偕行

我深情的呼喚：江山竟如此多嬌！

人兒呀在歡聲笑語中走過

留下天邊五彩的霞光

千言萬語道不盡我的愛

相視無言，道聲珍重

我聽著那嬰兒的初啼，歸盼著兒女的長大

明日的美好還等著你們去搭建

我深情的呼喚：江山竟如此多嬌！

噢~~，江山如此多嬌！

ps:哈哈，英語沒過四級的人默默留下人生第一首翻譯歌詞。

我看見樹已鬱郁玫瑰亦紅

我看見它們亦為你我而綻放

我心亦想世界啊多麼美妙

我看見天空亦藍雲朵亦白

明麗的白日聖潔的黑夜

我心亦想世界啊多麼美妙

天空之虹是多麼絢爛

映照在匆匆走過的路人的面龐

久違的友人握手寒暄

他們心中訴說我亦愛你

我看見嬰兒啼哭看其成長

他們亦能學習到我所未知

我心亦想世界啊多麼美妙

我看見青青樹，也看見花紅妝

我看見它們，在為你我綻放

我心言說，這世界真好

我看見湛藍的天，潔白的雲

明媚的白晝，還有寧謐的昏

我心言說，這世界真好

最美的是七彩的霓虹，在天上閃耀

還有走過的人，臉上掛著的笑

我看見朋友們，握手說你早

其實他們是在說，遇見你真好

我聽見嬰兒哭，也看他們成長

他們會學好多好多東西跟我不一樣

我心言說，這世界真好

是啊，這世界真好

I see trees of green, red roses too

幸見，綠樹成蔭，玫瑰如血，

I see them bloom for me and you

幸見，眾展芳顏，為我為卿

And I think to myself what a wonderful world.

何德幸之，得見良辰如畫，美景如斯

I see skies of blue and clouds of white

幸見，萬丈高湛，成雲成棉

The bright blessed days, the dark sacred nights

幸見，百鳥歌日，愁昏蓋幕

And I think to myself what a wonderful world.

何徳幸之，得見良辰如畫，美景如斯

The colors of the rainbow so pretty in the sky

彩虹貫日，橫穿蒼穹

Are also on the faces of people going by

且行且止，人面相映

I see friends shaking hands saying how do you do

幸見，有友作揖，寒暄之語

They"re really saying I love you.

子之心意，實為相表

I hear babies cry, I watch them grow

幸聞，膝下有兒，承歡哭啼

They"ll learn much more than I"ll never know

如今爾亭亭而長，始覺青出於藍

And I think to myself what a wonderful world

何徳幸之，得見良辰如畫，美景如斯

Yes I think to myself what a wonderful world.

誠是蒼天厚待，得見良辰如畫，美景如斯

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很喜歡的歌詞，不惜手機來答。不玩文字遊戲，但求準確傳達（我自己聽到歌詞時的）情緒。

I see trees of green, red roses too 瞧見樹的綠，玫瑰的紅

I see them bloom for me and you 萬般色彩只為你我存在

And I think to myself what a wonderful world. 我在想，這真是個奇妙的世界

I see skies of blue and clouds of white 瞧見天的藍，雲的白

The bright blessed days, the dark sacred nights 長日悠悠，夜色沉沉

And I think to myself what a wonderful world. 我在想，這真是個奇妙的世界

The colors of the rainbow so pretty in the sky 瞧見天上彩虹繽紛

Are also on the faces of people going by 在每個人臉上倒映出燦爛的表情

I see friends shaking hands saying how do you do 朋友見面笑逐顏開

They"re really saying I love you. 真誠的表達感情

I hear babies cry, I watch them grow 瞧見嬰兒啼哭、慢慢長大

They"ll learn much more than I"ll never know 他們的未來還會更美好

And I think to myself what a wonderful world 我在想，這真是個奇妙的世界

Yes I think to myself what a wonderful world. 是的，我在想，這真是個奇妙的世界

翻譯完發現這個詞的確是神作，竟把平凡無奇寫得驚心動魄，遣詞造句毫不誇張，翻譯需要很高的中文水平。